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'The best holiday I ever had'

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  • Essay length: 1123 words
  • Submitted: 19/08/2003
  • Marked by teacher: (?) Jeff Taylor
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GCSE Writing to Inform, Explain and Describe

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4 star(s)

This is a well-told story, with an appropriate, sometimes slightly informal, light tone. The language is mostly quite simple and sentence construction is sufficiently varied.

Punctuation is quite frequently faulty and paragraph construction is loose, with too many short paragraphs.

4 stars

Marked by teacher Jeff Taylor 20/05/2013

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'The best holiday I ever had'

The best holiday I ever had was when I went to Florida with my family.

When my Dad told me I was very excited because it was going to be my first time in the 'sun shine state of America'. I asked my dad when where we going and he said 'we are going on the 26TH July and coming home on the9th August' but the bad thing was I had to wait two months to go.

Time flew by and the next thing I knew I was packing my suitcase, I packed in lots of t-shirts and shorts. My mum packed in lots of bottles of sun cream because she is the one who goes on and on saying 'be careful in the sun'.

After all the bags were packed into the boot we all were on our way to fourteen days of sunshine.

When we got to the airport we left our luggage with the airport staff to put it on to the plane.

A message came up on the T.V screen saying that our flight had been delayed for 8 hours.

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This is a well-told story, with an appropriate, sometimes slightly informal, light tone. The language is mostly quite simple and sentence construction is sufficiently varied.

Punctuation is quite frequently faulty and paragraph construction is loose, with too many short paragraphs.

4 stars

Marked by teacher Jeff Taylor 20/05/2013

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