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THE BIRTHDAY PARTY Have you ever been so afraid that you have felt that even your hair trembled? When a delightful day starts and you are full of life

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THE BIRTHDAY PARTY Have you ever been so afraid that you have felt that even your hair trembled? When a delightful day starts and you are full of life but suddenly you think you are not going to tell your friends and family how much you love them, and how much you miss them before you die. At 7 o'clock in the evening I went to the cinema with some friends to celebrate my birthday. I knew that something was going wrong. I knew that, that night wasn't an ordinary night. I knew I had to go home on foot and not by car. Everything and everyone was different. My friends arrived and we decided to watch a horror movie, "Gothika". We entered the screen but something strange happened. There weren't any other people! In the middle of the movie somebody was calling me. I did not know the number, so I did not answered but whoever it was, he kept calling. I answered. A creepy voice whispered, "It will rain tonight." I told my friends about it, and they laughed. "Leoni don't be crazy! It's just a joke! ...read more.

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She was a short, fat lady and with grey hair. Was she behind this bad joke? She seemed like an ordinary woman with droopy eyes and short hair. I started walking towards her when a black figure appeared. Who was he? Was he someone she knew? Was he the one that phoned me? What was this night about? The man had long, black hair and almond eyes. He was carrying something. A knife! I wanted to warn her but I couldn't move. I was stuck and I couldn't move my legs. I called Maria she was sleeping. Jane was sleeping too. What shall I do? Who shall I phone to come and help me? What if it was all my imagination? I phoned Chris, I didn't say much. I just told him to come to the narrow road, near the cinema. The woman was still there. She seemed to be looking for something. The man was still behind her. I told Chris to pull me just to try and move my legs. ...read more.

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"Oh no!" I shouted. "What's wrong?" Maria asked. "I saw a nightmare. Don't tell me to explain it because I cannot. Please can somebody do me a favour?" I asked. "Whatever you want! We will always be there for you!" Joanna shouted. "Can you phone this number back?" I asked. "Sure." Joanna said. She phoned. She waited. She phoned another time. Nobody answered. She phoned from her mobile. Again. No answer. "Leoni are you sure this is the right number?" She asked. "Yes. This was the number that phoned me." I whispered. "But..."She mumbled. "But what? What is wrong? Tell me!" I cried. "This number is not in use." She whispered. "It is! Look it is calling me again."" I complained. "Answer it." Maria suggested. "I t will rain tonight!" A creepy voice whispered. "Oh no! This cannot be happening! Can you take me home? Please?" I asked desperately. "Hello? Can you hear me? Maria? Joanna? Chris? Epaminondas?" I shouted. But nobody could hear me. It seemed that I was trapped somewhere and nobody could hear me or even see me. Yes...I was dreaming!!!!!!!! I opened my eyes and suddenly the lights went on, a chorus of happy voices yelled happily happy birthday to me! Leoni Kyprianidou 4E ...read more.

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