The Challenge

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Andrew Pujol 10c

The Challenge

As the speaker announced that the first men's one hundred meters Olympic heat, my event, would commence in five minutes, I thought back to five years ago when I was fifteen and I first got into swimming. My instructor, Jim Read, was possibly the meanest person I have ever met in my life. I practised three times every week, and every week Jim would tell me that I would not amount to anything. When I shared my dream of winning Olympic Gold, he just laughed and said, “you will never be good enough to be in the team, let alone win a medal.” I despised that man.  I wish he was here today, I am not only in the British National Team, I am at the Olympics and I have a chance of forfiling my dream, and showing him and the rest of the world I have what it takes to win a Gold Medal.

           Competing with me in the first heat was the reigning champion James Mackintosh, a record breaking American who I have a lot of respect for. Although I have respect for him I do not like him. He is the type of person who thinks he is better than everyone else.  I overheard him telling his friends that he does not think there is any way possible that anyone else could get the Gold, unless he died in a car accident on the way to the final. I hoped I would change his mind during the first heat.

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           I was standing on the starting block in lane three waiting for the starting pistol, suddenly it fired and I hurled my body into the water and began to swim as fast as my body would take me. I neared the end of the first fifty metres and I became aware that the African in land two was quite a way behind me. I executed a perfect turn and then swam as fast as I could. I reached the end and while I was catching my breath I realised that I have won the ...

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