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The crash

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Introduction

Creative Writing Coursework Dael Evans 2002-10-09 The crash As I woke up all I could see was a blur of bright lights. I kept my eyes closed for a minute and tried again, opening them slowly at first, to get used to the daylight. Where was I? This place isn't familiar: what's that smell? Smells like kitchen cleaner and disinfectant mixed into one. I still didn't recollect where I was, what I was doing here. All I could remember from the past memories was a bang and a sudden jolt, then darkness and nothing more. Could this be of some significance to why I was here, I just don't know. There was a knock at what I thought was the door, so I must be in some sort of room. "Hello Mr. Chapman", said a well-educated voice, "Do you know where you are right now?" "Um, no. Where am I?", I said in a hoarse and tired voice because my throat was pretty sore. ...read more.

Middle

"Oh my God, are you sure you're O.K.?" "I don't know, I just found out what happened to the other person in the other car." "Yes we heard as well, it's very sad, do you remember anything that happened?" "Things are coming back slowly, but they're still pretty vague." "Try to remember and tell us what happened son, remember as much as you can." Things were definitely coming back to me now. So, I started to tell my story, all of which I could remember. I had left the office at about 5.30 p.m. and had had a good day at work. I took the lift down the floors of the high-rise office block and got off at the basement level as that's were my car was parked. The weather was freezing down here, it was the middle of December and I could see my breath turning into mist as soon as it left my mouth. ...read more.

Conclusion

As i struggled to find the brake pedal I felt the car slide completely out of control and across the road into the path of the oncoming car. Time seemed to stand still for that moment that I knew I was going to hit the other vehicle, then after that I heard a screech of brakes and then a huge ear-splitting bang followed by the crunching sound of metal on metal Then all I could remember was being in so much pain and hearing hissing sounds coming from the engine and I almost thought for sure that I was going to die, and then blackness. "Oh my God", said my mother, who was yet again breaking into a flood of tears. "I just don't know what to think, you almost died for Christ's sake!" "Don't worry Jane", my dad said, reassuringly. "The main thing is that he's alright." "But what about the person in the other car, he wasn't so lucky, was he!" "No, but all we can do for him now is pray." Words 1,038 ...read more.

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