The Deserted House

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The Deserted House

I walked that road every day on my way to school, and had often glanced at the house but that day I actually stopped to look at it properly.  I’m not sure what drew my attention to it, maybe it was the creaking gate or the banging of the door at the end of the path as the wind whistled through it into the house.  Something drew me from the pavement towards the overgrown privet hedge, which partially obscured the rotting wooden gate, with the paint peeling from it.  As I stepped inside the gate I was astounded by just how unkept it was.  The long grass was a wilderness, filled with crisp packets and cans, and any other rubbish that people felt like hurling over the hedge or gate.  There were the remains of an oriental take-away meal, which looked like it had attracted rodents.  As well as long grass, the wilderness was full of thistles and there were dandelion seeds blowing everywhere.  The flowerbeds were now barely visible to the side of the grass and filled with weeds and what was left of the hardwearing perennials.  After I had managed to make my way down the path, kicking the litter to one side and trying to steer clear of the stinging nettles, I was amazed to see that postmen and people who deliver leaflets had actually wasted their time in delivering to that obviously vacant address.  The letterbox was overflowing, and the rest was being blown around the path and garden by the wind.  The free newspapers were yellowing in the sun.

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I took a couple of steps back to look more closely at the exterior of the house, and I noticed just how neglected it was.  From the road I could see that there was ivy up to the window sills, now much closer I could see the damage it had caused, it had pulled the majority of the rendering off the bricks.  The windowsills were rotting as well, like the gate; the varnish obviously had not been replaced in a long time, so the wood had been exposed to the elements.  The one remaining window at the front of ...

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