The Eliminator

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The Eliminator

It was a dark and stormy night out on the Scottish glens, no lights, not a sound to be heard. The nearest town is Kilgore, a 12 miles away. Suddenly out of nowhere bag pipes sounded getting louder and louder, the out of the mist come the master of the sky, The Flying Scotsman.

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Beep, beep, beep, beep, beep, beep, beep, beep.

Dennis woke up. The holiday began. He looked out the window, the waves were splashing on the golden sand. He walked down the stairs. The aroma of burning pig flesh filled his nostrils. It was about 6:30 am. Dennis turned on the TV, Barney was on  (the big purple tyrannosaurus rex)            

Dennis’ younger  brother Garth eagerly ran down the stairs tripping over himself and smacking his loaf on the head, knocking himself unconscious for a short a amount of time. He quickly recovered.

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About 2 hours later Dennis, Garth, Charlie (Dennis’ older brother) and there dad decided to go for a walk to sample the local area. They went to the local park.

“ I don’t like the look of some of these rides, dad”, exclaimed Dennis.

“ Oh don’t be such a spoil sport !”, groaned Garth.

“ Yeah, come on Den” Said Charlie.

“ But Dad”, protested Dennis.

  But it was too late Dennis’ brothers were dragging him to the park.  Dennis decide to go on the roundabout. Dennis’ older brother Charlie pushed him, round and round and round they ...

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