The Hitchhiker.

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The Hitchhiker

        It was a dark, windy night, thundering down with pouring rain.  Judy was driving down the deserted road, listening to the sound of the radio.  She was imagining about her journey to the beautiful sight of the countryside.  The road was surrounded by towering trees waving in the sky. Suddenly she saw a tall dark figure ahead, at the side of the road shivering.  She began to pull over.  He approached the car, he created an impression of darkness like he was a criminal.  He was wearing a long dark coat with ripped trousers dripping with water absorbed into his clothes.  He had a big bushy beard with a woolly hat like Santa Claus.   Even though he seemed mysterious Judy decided to offer him a ride.  The hitchhiker responded, “Yes please.”  

He entered Judy’s vehicle.  She suspected something as he had red stains on his gloves but welcomed him in.  

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“Hi, my name is Judy.  I am heading to the countryside if that is OK?” Judy greeted him.

The hitchhiker replied in a sharp voice, “That’s great by the way I’m Jeff.”  

He brought with him a huge stuffed bag like it was packed with books.  They then drove on.

        Judy began to question Jeff about where he came from trying not to interrogate him.

“So where do you come from?” Judy asked.

“Oh I just had some personal problems and just wanted to get away, so I brought all my clothes in this bag.” Jeff answered.  They ...

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