The Island of Damar

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The Island of Damar

I looked down at the tiny island in the

distance. The island that was about to turn

my life completely upside down. It's name,

Damar. It is a small island in Indonesia. It

has a population of 23 people, everyone of

these people archaeological diggers. My

dad, Jay, was flying out to join them. There

was some kind of dig on the go and my dad

was called for. Me, being Rhia, had to go

with him. Most kids of my age would stay at

home with a relative. Unfortunately, I have

none. My mum died about four years ago in

a tragic car accident. She drove her car into

a ditch and no one found her until the next

morning. I don't know of any other relatives

that i have. The only other family member I

have is my twerp of a brother. He is 9 years

old and is extremely annoying. His hair is

like barbed wire, it is impossible to brush

using any comb. My dad must have bought

about 20 different sized combs to try and

brush it and about 50 different shampoos. It

is blondish-brown in colour and is kind of

centre parted. He doesn't care in the

slightest about his appearance and most of

the time he just wears a pair of tracky

bottoms and a pole shirt. His name is Pete.

Any way, less of that twerp, back to me. I am

19 years old and currently do not have a

boyfriend. I have blondish-brown permed

hair just past my shoulders in length and

have big, blue, dazzling eyes. Unlike my

brother I care ALOT about my appearance.

Everything has to be colour co-ordinated. My

dad is always fussing at me, he says I have

loads of clothes and hardly any of them are

worn.

It had been a long, tiring journey and a

boring one at that. If I had been able to bring

my friend Chazza, it would've been a right

laugh. I was suffering from toothache

because the cheesecake that we had for

lunch hadn't been properly defrosted and I

really hurt my tooth.

Damar was getting bigger and bigger so I

knew we were soon to land. From what I

could see from above, it just looked like a

floating rain forest. There were huge trees

but I could not spot any houses or

apartments for us to stay in. It was

Join now!

hammering it down with rain. I knew this

because I could hear the rain drops

bouncing of the roof of the plane.

Touchdown. We had landed. We floated

along the surface for some time before we

came to a complete stop. I looked out of the

cabin window and stared amazingly at a

huge cliff that towered above the left hand

side of the   sea plane, I could not see the

top of it. There was nothing else to be seen.

My dad rose from his seat and turned ...

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