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The Journey

It was pitch black. Ben was just rousing after being knocked unconscious. How had he got here and, more to the point, where was here?

Looking around him, Ben could see nothing. No lights or windows were visible through the darkness. Feeling terrible, Ben slowly got up on his feet and stumbled forward until he hit a wall. He searched the walls for a light switch or someway of escaping from this unknown and terrifying situation. He was unsuccessful. All he found were lumps of moss, and some sharp rocks protruding from the wall. Ben slumped onto the floor and thought about how he could have arrived in this enclosed, lightless room.

It was a dismal morning. The weather was being kind to England for the middle of December, but it was a school day towards the end of term. It was quiet in the house. No noise could be heard other than three alarms trying hard but failing to wake up four very sleepy people. After hearing his ‘beep-beep, beep-beep…’ alarm for ten minutes, Ben finally managed to pull himself out of bed. He turned on the light, which blinded him at first, and went to the bathroom to wash.

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When Ben had finished, he was met by an unfamiliar face. His sister Laura without makeup. Laura was thirteen, two years younger than Ben, and she hardly ever left her room, let alone the house without putting makeup on. It was quite a scary sight to Ben. She looked like a cross between a monkey and a pile of hair. She charged past him, into the bathroom and slammed the door in his face.

Usually, Ben would have got Laura back for that but it was too early in the morning. Ben went into his room and got dressed for ...

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