The killer in the back seat

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The Killer In The Back Seat

It was a mid-November evening. The time was 7:30PM. A pitch black sky littered the sky with shiny stars. As a group of drunken partygoers crossed the path, a woman could be seen carefully peeking from behind a closed curtain. This woman was only known to her neighbours as Mrs.Wilson because she never went out, she never answered the door to anyone and she didn’t have a family. Nobody knew who she really was.

       Just further down the road, a streetlight that was illuminating the concrete below stopped functioning. The street went dark. A car, dark green in colour, drove slowly up the avenue, its headlights turned off. It stopped in front of Mrs.Wilsons house. A figure stepped out from the passenger seat, slamming the door behind them. Instead of knocking on the front door, it drifted around the back into the garden behind the house. Across the road, the curtain opened and a woman’s face appeared at the window. Her name was Joanna Ryder. She was a police officer at the local police station. As she looked across the road, she saw the car stationed in the drive. There was a manly figure sat in the driver seat smoking a cigarette. She looked up at the house. All the lights were on. But just before she looked away, a black shape walked past the curtains upstairs. Suddenly, the lights went off and someone ran back around the house and into the car. Quickly, the car sped off and left the avenue. What had just happened? No one ever went to Mrs. Wilson’s house because she never answered the door and all guests were greeted with “go away” from behind a locked door. She closed the curtains and climbed into bed. She’d investigate in the morning, seeing as she was no longer on duty.

      The morning after the night’s events, Joanne climbed out of bed and got ready for her shift at the police station. But she got up earlier today so that she could investigate Mrs. Wilson’s house. As she went outside, she knocked at the door. No answer. Wasn’t unusual. She carefully lifted the latch on the gate and went around the back. She saw sparkles on the patio. They looked like small diamonds gleaming in the sun. The glass to the kitchen door had been smashed violently. She stepped over the grass and entered the kitchen. What a mess it was. Everything had either been thrown to the ground or smashed to pieces. Something had happened. She went into the living room. The TV was lying on the floor along with everything else. She went upstairs. Along the hallway was blood splattered everywhere – most of it coming from the bedroom. As she opened the door, she dropped the car keys. Mrs. Wilson was lying on the bed covered with blood and heavy stab wounds. Whoever had broken into her house last night had killed her. She looked around the room. No trace of aggravated burglary. This was planned.

      It wasn’t long before the police swarmed the entire avenue. They were now on the hunt for two evil killers after similar attacks two streets away, although these seemed like attacks on people who might reveal their identity. Joanne’s mother, Elizabeth, had called round to her house.

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“Whats gone on here?” she asked curiously, looking at the flood of officers.

“She was murdered last night by two men” she replied unlocking her police car for the shift. She climbed into her car and threw her bag into the backseat and started the engine. She drove out of the avenue and to the police station.

       It was all over the local newspapers and radios that day. ‘Serial killers on the loose’. When she arrived at the station, her boss, Ian fielding, shunned her into a room.

“Did you see anything last night?” he asked ...

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