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The Mansion

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It was a dark stormy night and the wind was blowing hard at my cheeks, tears fell from my eyes as the wind blew hard into them, I was starting to feel very dizzy as I walked around the twisting bending dirt path. I knew that I was lost in the dark, dark, forest. In the near distance I could hear hauling that seemed to be coming from wolves, there it was again, haul, haul, haul, the sounds of the hauling in the distance sent a chill up my spine, I suddenly heard a noise come from behind me, some think fast was moving from the under growth, it was heading straight for me, I suddenly started to run, faster, faster, until I could run no further, I slowly turned behind me, but to my surprise meant there was nothing there and there didn't seem to be any thing following me, I gasped a big breath whilst turning back to my front. ...read more.


I thought that I might have a quick look around the massive mansion before I took a nap, I didn't know if there was even an owner of the mansion, although I didn't think that there was as they would have heard me come in. There were four rooms leading of the hall way and I decided to choose the first room, the first room was very empty with a small fire place and a couple of candles, so I decided to move on to the next room, this room had a lot more in it, there were chairs, a big table and a massive painting of a vampire, I slowly moved to the next room, which was the kitchen, most of the room looked normal but in the left hand corner there was a massive rack full of knifes, this freaked me out slightly for a moment, I soon forgot about that as I moved over to the window in the kitchen, I looked carefully out at the view of the large forest. ...read more.


incessant person, I knew that I had to get out of here, very quickly, I wanted to help the person in the room, but I think he was all ready dead my looking at the amount of blood stained across the room. I slowly backed away from the door, and got up very quickly, I then moved half way down the corridor then suddenly I tripped on a louse wooded floor board, and I came down with a massive bang, I slowly watched the door at the end of the corridor, and to my horror the door swung open, and out came the tall blood sucking vampire, I couldn't move as I knew that I was now stuck, he came close and closer until he was only a couple of meters away, he stared into my eyes for a couple of seconds and then the worse thing happened, he brought out the knife which was covered in thick red blood, and I shouted out in pain as he......... 1 ...read more.

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