The Mermaid's tail's tale

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It’s the year 2000 everything is up to date, this twisted tale starts with a very gifted young male called Ryu Holmes who has been brought up to be one of the most excellent detective, maybe the best since Sherlock Holmes. In this very clever and very cunning story Ryu has a lot on his mind. While tension and suspense goes around everywhere he set off he has to solve who can cause all this chaos. Even though he has trouble unravelling the untameable quest he’s got a friend “Mo” to help the mystery even though he’s just in the way.

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While Ryu was walking back from the last day of Cambridge College until summer holiday, a sudden shout arrived to his ears. “Ryu~ wait for me!” “What the!!!!” he said in a surprised manner as he turned around. “Hey….it’s…..me” Mo said breathlessly. They walked home together as they always do, talking about girl’s ass.

As the next morning came Ryu’s doorbell rung. Ryu opened his eyes with an effort as he just woke up. “Who’s ringing my door at….” he reaches for the alarm clock and looks at the time, “Four in the fucking morning!!!” he gets up and walks towards the half blurry door while yawning and scratching the back of his bushy head “(there was a loud thump)Agh”! He shouted because he hit his little toe on his cupboard “Why me god why…..” he thought to him self. As he opened the door, no one was there he looks both left and right….. No one was there. He looks down and sees a brown and mysterious parcel; he looks around the corridors one more time….. No one was there, so he dragged the very heavy parcel into his room, as he just woke up and had no strength. He got a pair of scissors and cut the string that was wrapped around the brown-papered parcel. He was very puzzled why a parcel came at this sort of time but never thought nothing more of it. As he unravelled the parcel he saw a whole bunch of newspapers. Ryu picked one up and saw the front page; it showed a picture and an article about an unusual murder crime. It said that in an island near Scotland called McElroy, they found a man with his legs cut off and saw fish scales next to the corpse; the town’s people said that the killer was a mermaid. Ryu read on. In this island there was a legend. One cold dark midnight, a middle-aged women’s house was burnt down and found the charred black remains of the sufferer, but she also had no legs, no one knew who it might have been. It said it was a well known story on the island and everyone knew about it. Ryu checked all the other newspapers and found the same story on all the other newspapers. Ryu was keen on solving this crime, so he phoned Mo, his best friend “Hello….?” he answered in a tired kind of way. “Hey it’s me Ryu I was wondering if u would come with me to this island called McElroy.” “Where?!” he replied in a bewildered voice. “McElroy this island I received a bunch of newspaper from a stranger and I saw this very fascinating article about an unusual murder which took place there.” “(slight pause)……………” “So Mo, yes or no tell me?” Ryu said in an exiting kind of manner. “If  you want me to go clarify it all slowly.” After a few minutes of Ryu explaining what has happened. “………….. (Sigh) ok then let’s go” Mo said it like he never had an alternative.

Few days later they bought two tickets to McElroy by ferry.

“To be direct Ryu I don’t know why I’m here, next to you, going to a place, that I have never heard of” Mo said “To be honest Mo…… I don’t know why I’m going too” “(Anger in Mo’s face arise) SO WHY THE FUCK ARE WE HERE!!” Mo screamed furiously at Ryu. “It just felt exciting, it felt right.” “How about when you said it felt right to go to down the night club before an exam and I woke up the next morning with a lady next to me.” “Yea, what’s wrong with that?” “I’ll tell you what’s wrong with that, the lady was a man!! You fagot!!!” Mo shouted with a red face. “Oh yea ha-ha”! As they went on arguing they reached their destination. It looked empty as if a tornado just gusted through the town. “What happened here?” Ryu said unbelievably. A young and attractive girl in her early twenties walked past them like everything was normal. “Pardon me miss where is everyone?” Mo asked kindly, while Ryu obviously knew Mo liked her. “(With a sad tone) nearly everyone left since the legend of the mermaid” “But surely it can’t be a mermaid” Ryu said hesitantly. “Nobody’s quite sure, I hope someone solves the mystery as soon as possible” “You have just bumped in to your wish, I am Ryu master detective” Ryu said proudly”. “Ehm”! Mo coughed so that Ryu doesn’t forget about him. “(saying it like he doesn’t care) and my sidekick Mo” Ryu said.  “Hold on, Hold on, Sidekick!? No one calls Mo anyone’s bitch” The young girl laughed. “I didn’t catch your name” Mo said trying to talk in a low and manly voice. “(Confidently) it’s Sally” Ryu said as if he knew her. “Stop guessing asshole.” Mo believed. “It is….How…. How on earth did you know?” “Eyes and brains, I saw that little patch knitted on the upper part of your jumper” Mo and Sally looked “So it does” Sally said with a face that looked amazed and impressed. (Mo got a little jealous) “So can you show us where the murder scene is?” Mo asked so Sally can take her eyes off Ryu. “Sure follow me” she replied politely.

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They went on an empty highland road with grass covering everything but the roads, beautiful blue sky, with mountains with a touch of frost at the top which you could see over thousands of kilometres away, as they kept on walking the temperature became lower and as the time went past the sky turned darker until it was pitch black. “Pass me a scarf Ryu” Mo asked with a shivering voice. “Sorry mate I’m wearing all five of them, heh heh heh” Ryu laughed sinisterly. “Well fuck you, you fucking square!!” Mo shouted angrily. “Only joking, here you go,” ...

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