The Norfolk Whistler.

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The Norfolk Whistler

She stood in the road and stared down into the dark, empty road that seemed to have no end. The one road she did not want to walk down in the dark especially alone because this was where the whistlers three other victims had been found. Valerie looked around to see if there was another route home but no, nothing was available! She began walking forward whilst rummaging through her bag trying to find her scarf and gloves because it was starting to get cold. She then sifted through her pockets for the torch her father had given her to walk across their farm with, but she had no luck and couldn’t find it!

She walked shakily forward into the black hole, tears trickled down her face with fear thinking of what her father would do and say. Walking past all the old spooky houses she realised she would soon be alone.

As she walked past her last chance of getting home (a taxi rank that was situated on the outskirts of town) she came to a sudden halt and thought she could get them to take her home and she could then get her father to pay when she got home. She decided to go inside and try and get some help. As she entered the small port-a-cabin, she looked around to see if anyone was there but as far as she could see there was nobody there she leant against the wall and slid down until she was sitting on the floor crying. A door in the corner of the room slammed open, out came a tall, grubby-looking man wearing jeans and a baggy t-shirt, he slumped down in the nearest chair. Valerie quivered in the corner by the entrance hoping he wouldn’t notice her, she thought she would be told off or something. The man went to look out the small grubby window as he did Valerie stood up slowly and turned around to open the door, But as she opened the door the phone began to ring so the man turned around and spotted Valerie, he said “hang on a minute I’ll rid of this and you can tell me what is wrong” Valerie felt assured by this and shut the door and stood by the small grubby window. After the man got off the phone he walked over to Valerie and put his arm around her

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“What’s up then?” he asked Valerie

“Nothing it doesn’t matter” She replied

“Come on there is, you’ve been crying”

“I’ve been to a party and I’ve missed the last bus and I have no other way to get home! I was going to get a cab but I saw you’re price guide and I don’t have enough money! I have to walk home now and my dad will kill me! Especially with the serial killer about.”

“Where do you live?”

“Cobbs Marsh”

“Do you want a lift?”

“Err I don’t know…..”

“It’s up to you; you are perfectly safe with ...

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