The old man and the sea by Earnest Hemmingway, alternate ending He took all his pain and what was left of his strength and his long gone pride and he put it against the fishes agony

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The old man and the sea by Earnest Hemmingway, alternate ending

He took all his pain and what was left of his strength and his long gone pride and he put it against the fishes agony and the fish came over to his side and swam gently on his side, his bill almost touching the planking of the skiff, and started to pass the boat, long, deep, wide, silver and barred with purple and interminable in the water.

The old man dropped the line and put his foot on it and lifted he harpoon high and drove it down with all his remaining strength.

He watched as it passed straight through the side of the great fish, staining the deep blue waters red, leaving swirls of maroon in its wake, little ghost fish sent to mock me he thought.

 The great fish swam away with the little rope going straight through the flesh near the base of its tail.

 ‘I feel your pain’ the old man spoke out loud to the fish. The harpoon must be jammed against his side and unable to come back through, he thought.

 Oh great fish, fine friend, what an ignoble end this will give, why this is worse than bone spurs, it must be. The pressure against his shoulders had lessened, the acute pain from the line cutting his right hand eased.

 ‘So, I have no strength left you, have beaten me worthy adversary, but to do so you will die a long drawn out slow death, like a criminal chained to another’ The words hurt his dry lips increasing the depth of the furrows in the flesh.  

‘I will not bring you in like this’ he spoke again to the marlin, not after all that we have been through, he thought, no I will not shame either of us like this. If the fish managed to free itself before he could untie the rope from the bitt the resulting hole left behind would equivalent to a feast for two families.

His head was getting fuzzy again, but the thought to free the fish remained strong. ‘I will cut you loose’ he said ‘yes I have my knife, I will make both my hands work for this’.  He took his knife and sawed at the rope, back and forth, back and forth cutting it with the rhythm of the waves. He used his left hand to press down on top of the other as much as it would allow him to. After what felt like an age he broke right through the rope, as the last few strands were severed, his left hand cramped again causing him to drop his knife into the vast waters.  But the rope was cleaved in two, he had freed his adversary.

He rested then, dipping his hands one at a time in the healing cleansing salty sea.

Taking time to recover from his efforts, the pressure of the line a constant ache across his shoulders, he pondered the repercussions of sailing the skiff so far out.  I shouldn’t have gone out so far fish, he thought, aloud he said ‘I’m sorry’. As he continued to ponder the wiseness of the distance his head started to clear. The loss of his knife playing on his mind. ‘Oh why am I so stupid?’ he whispered in a harsh tone. Of course he thought to himself, ESTUPIDO! He silently cursed his foolishness. It was my head, it was unclear, the flying fish I ate was long ago. Why didn’t I just untie the rope from the bitt? Why did I cut it? How much energy did I waste sawing? My knife, my knife, it would be here if I had not been so stupid, the thoughts wound around and around his head. ‘Oh great fish I bet you’d of never committed such a stupid act’ He said to the moving fin of the fish.

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The great fish carried on swimming, slowly but steadily, the phosphorescent trails of its blood faint now, almost gone.

The marlin had slowed, the old man noticed, he thought the lack of food must be taking its toll on him as well by now.

He must get some rest, even the great DiMaggio must rest sometimes, even before the bone spurs he must have worn himself out, he must have tired and wanted, no, longed for rest.  Longed for rest, just like he did.  I bet the wonderful DiMaggio’s’ father the great fisherman would understand, he said to himself, he must of fought some ...

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