The poems 'Telephone Conversation' by Wole Soyinka and 'You will be hearing from us shortly' by U A Fanthorpe both discuss prejudice and discrimination through the use of tone and language.

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Tyrel Bennett

Twentieth Century Poetry

Tyrel Bennett

The poems ‘Telephone Conversation’ by Wole Soyinka and ‘You will be hearing from us shortly’ by U A Fanthorpe both discuss prejudice and discrimination through the use of tone and language. The poem ‘You will be hearing from us shortly’ uses the voice of the interviewer to convey the prejudice.

The first line in the poem, ‘You feel adequate to the demands of this decision?’ immediately implies that the interviewer is well educated, from the use of sophisticated language, but that they are also snobbish and rude and this sets the tone for the rest of the poem. The first stanza involves talking about the people’s qualifications and we are able to see that the interviewer already has negative thoughts about the interviewee, but at this moment, her prejudice is more subtle then at the end of the poem. Ageism is the next prejudice that the interviewer embarks on and again they say, ‘Perhaps you feel able/To make your own comment about that,’ which shows their condescending tone towards the candidate. The interviewer is also showing her superiority over the candidate, as she knows that the candidate will not try to question her.  When they say, ‘ And now the delicate matter: your looks,’ here it looks as is they are trying to implement some subtleness but they are not doing so and are still they are awfully blunt and offensive. The colon in the line furthermore indicates the candour of the prejudice. Then at the end of the stanza there is a change in structure as there is now a shortened lined followed by one word. This line reads, ‘Perhaps, find your appearance /: Disturbing?’ this enjambment emphasizes the word, ‘Disturbing?’ as does the question mark and the gap created by the shortened line. The repetitions of the question marks in the fifth stanza imply that the interviewee has a lack of intelligence and once again, the interviewer is enforcing their superiority. In addition, the constant repetition of educate, ‘Of your education?’ and, ‘Where were you educated?’ followed by a question mark also implies the condescending tone. This also shows a difference as the interviewer is only interested in people who attended high-class public schools such as Eaton and Harrow school. The use of the enjambment in this stanza emphasizes the questions as the original line structure is now ignored and the lines are now set out in order to emphasize the questions. Finally, in the last stanza, the interviewer is completely dismissive of the candidate thinks that they should not have any children, this implies that the interviewer thinks that they are in a very different class, and is completely undermining the candidate. Although the interviewer is polite, the subtext is very in insulting and as the poem progresses their tone becomes more supercilious and the voice more verbose.

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The candidate, in contrast to the interviewer, has no authority and as they do not try to react to the interviewers comments. They seem disappointed and disheartened at what they hear so they do not say much. However a brief moment in defiance is shown when they say, ‘So glad we agree,’ this implies that the candidate does have some pride and is entitled to their own thoughts. This overall is faltered by the fact that the interviewer has all the power and is allowed to undermine candidate. Therefore, by the end of the poem the candidate has no ...

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