The Price of Trust (Creative Writing)Susan Mason was a young woman. Most of the officers just took one look and settled on the theory of suicide but James knew that wasnt the case. To him all of the signs were wrong.

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Jake Maguire        English Creative Writing        10 GOC

The Price of Trust

“There, all done”. James had been working all day for a week on this case and he couldn’t wait for the paperwork to be checked and finalised.

“Ok thanks James, you get home now, you deserve a rest”.

“Yea sure Simon, see you next week”.

James grabbed his coat, bags, and keys and left his office. Simon Matthews, James’ boss, was always last to leave the station. He never knew why. He had lots of theories on why Simon was always last but he never knew for sure. He was relieved that the case on Susan Mason; which he had been working on all month was over and that he could look forward to a free weekend.

Susan Mason was a young woman. Most of the officers just took one look and settled on the theory of suicide but James knew that wasn’t the case. To him all of the signs were wrong. He couldn’t find any evidence to show that Susan had an unhappy or sad life. In fact, it was the opposite. James investigated it further and seemed to have cracked the case. A young man ticked all of the boxes and fitted the criteria for the murder of Susan. but nobody listened. Ted Vecna. The thought of that name made James shudder. He was tall, thin and creepy, just like in the films. However, he was a very powerful and respected man. This made most police officers turn a blind eye on any crime that he had committed. Simon Matthews, in particular dismissed the case. James looked up to Simon as an excellent cop but maybe even he was scared of what Ted could achieve with a crowbar. In the end James just decided to give up and leave the case as a suicide.

James opened the door to his small, grotty flat and dropped his bags on the floor. He tossed his keys and coat onto the table and flung himself onto the sofa. He breathed a huge sigh of relief and switched on the TV. He wasn’t surprised that there was nothing on, but he settled to watch the BBC news. He was starting to drop off but something on the news caught his attention.

“Tonight’s news. A young girl committed suicide on Thursday night. The young girl has been named as Zoe Jones. It is not yet known how or why she did it. David Goldberth reports from outside the Jones house”. James knew that his free weekend had just been cut short and the prospect of relaxing was thrown out of the window. James realized that this woman resembled Susan Mason. Lots of ideas and theories were jumbled around in James’ mind as he seemed to think that both the Susan Mason and Zoe Jones case were connected. He couldn’t be sure but he had a gut feeling. His gut feeling usually didn’t let him down. James thought for a moment but gave in to his body which was demanding sleep.  

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James woke up the next morning and caught a sleepy glance at his watch. His heart thundered as he realized that he should have been at work 15 minutes ago. He jumped up, put a clean set of clothes on and dashed for his car. He arrived at the station to find it busy with people and preoccupied with other cases. This surprised him as he thought they would be busy with the suicide case. James wandered into the main room to find Simon Matthews standing on top of a desk grabbing people’s attention.  

“James, over here”. Simon ...

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