The Ring of Light

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By Jordan Neenan

English Coursework :Original Writing

The Ring of Light

Hello, my name is Luke; I will be your narrator throughout this story. I know the characters intimately and will introduce you to them when they come along. Brace yourself for I am going to take you through an enchanted and magical but then also evil story about a young man’s adventure through a mystical world. So sit back and make yourself comfortable.

        A well-built young man stood in the doorway of a small thatched cottage,

        ‘Has anyone seen Wilfred? Mum?’ His mother was a plump woman with dark hair and blue eyes. She was sitting in a large armchair reading a book entitled ‘Does the Ring of Light Really Exist?’

        ‘No, sorry Danny dear, I haven’t been out today. I’m not feeling too good, maybe your father has.’        

‘Mum why do you read such nonsense? ’ Asked Danny,

        ‘Its not nonsense dear, I’m just…’

          ‘Expanding your mind, yes I know, you say that about every book you read but you know I’m right.’ Danny said this in a frustrated tone but his mother didn’t seem to be listening so he walked back out of the door.

        Now in the light you could see Danny was a tall handsome young man, long dark hair the same as his mothers in a ponytail and the most brilliant green eyes you could ever imagine, he had a broad-sword hanging from his waist, a quiver of arrows on his back and a bow in his hand. ‘Father.’ He yelled,

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        ‘Yeh?’ came a reply from a rather large barn stood on the edge of a field.

        ‘Have you seen Wilfred?’ He asked,

        ‘No, and why don’t ya stop wastin’ time with that stupid hoarse and help me for once, there are a million jobs that need doin’ and you ain’t doin’ none of ‘em.’ By the time he had finished the sentence Danny was already half way across the field heading to the forest.

        He eventually arrived back at the barn where he found Wilfred grazing quite merrily beside the barn; Danny was just about to lose his temper when ...

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