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The sea was calm as I got into the warm water I could see some brightly coloured fish swimming beneath my feet

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The sea was calm as I got into the warm water I could see some brightly coloured fish swimming beneath my feet. I waited to get used to the feel of all my scuba gear in the blue sparkling water I told the boat driver that I would be back within an hour. I started to swim away, gently kicking my feet I could see the coral reef beneath me, I dived down towards the brightly coloured corals and fish. There were hundreds of different types of rare coral so I decided to take some samples that I could study when I got back home. I was surrounded by hundreds of strange looking fish they were weaving and darting between the coral .the dive was proving highly successful so far until I saw a huge dark shadow deep beneath me , I wasn't sure what it was ,but I had a really bad feeling deep inside my chest the gigantic shadow was circling beneath me , I was starting to get extremely scared . ...read more.

Middle

sea I could se the shark rising slowly towards me ,I glanced up to see if the boat was still there thankfully it was. I started to relax I thought everything as going to be ok, I looked down into the water and I was alarmed to see that the shark had closed the distance between us by half, then all of a sudden it started to swim straight towards me, there was nothing I could do, the shark was coming right at me, getting closer and closer, second by second. It reached me; suddenly it turned swiftly towards my left just brushing my air tanks. I thought the shark was going to attack me , I thought I was going to die, then out of the corner of my eye I saw the distinctive fin heading my way, I felt a powerful thud against my legs , I immediately knew that they were broken , I screamed out in pain ,but no sound came out ,just bubbles, I was in agony ,sharp shooting pains started to come up my body from my shins , I couldn't feel anything ...read more.

Conclusion

Then something made the ain come back as if to remind me that it was still there ,this gave the determination to live I desperately grabbed at the sharks eyes trying to gouge them with my hands, by this point the shark must of thought it would be having a great feast courtesy of me, I wasn't going g to die today ,not like this, all of a sudden the shark let go, I didn't know why or how it happened, all I knew was that I was free and I had to get out of the water, I started swimming back towards the surface, I saw the sunlight cutting into the dark red water, I couldn't remember how long ago I had started the dive but it seemed like hours. I finally broke the surface and took in long deep gulps of air, I could feel my lungs relaxing but the pain was still raging through my body, I looked around to see any sign of the boat and to my relief it was close I shouted at the driver then I passed out. James Hoskyns Jones ?? ?? ?? ?? ...read more.

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