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The story starts as my brother Peter unlocked the front door after going out with his mates. He stepped into the living room after shutting the front door silently, he heard a noise coming from the kitchen.

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Introduction

The story starts as my brother Peter unlocked the front door after going out with his mates. He stepped into the living room after shutting the front door silently, he heard a noise coming from the kitchen. As he went to inspect it, he realised that the noise was a continuous banging. He listened more carefully until he heard a moaning sound too. Peter noticed that the door was slightly ajar and as he looked in, the moonlight reflected off the shiny surface of the table. This provided him enough light for him to see that I was sat on the floor banging my forehead into the wall. Peter started to make his way up to bed when he realised what he just saw and rushed downstairs. "I'm seeing them again," I said with my head still hitting the plasterboard wall. "Daniel, it's...it's just your imagination," Peter lied knowing full well it wasn't. "Go to bed." I climbed into bed after getting myself a glass of water and I turned off my light. ...read more.

Middle

As the ceremony passed and the meal was eaten, the beer was being supped at a pace as we had a good 8 hours of it. I went back to my room at about 3 O'clock in the morning and made myself at home, this part of the manor looked very familiar to me but I have never seen it before. It wasn't long before I was asleep. I started to dream again, the blonde girl I was chasing also looked familiar. Her shoes had slowed her down and she was easily caught. I cut her throat and watched her bleed, for some reason I felt very good about myself. Suddenly my dream changed, I was standing under some gallows looking up at a man I also recognised. This was the first time this had happened to me. With an unexpected jilt I awoke and looked around. In the corner of the room was a young girl crying, when she noticed me she ran for the door and down a hallway. Curiosity got the better of me and I followed her, as I was running I saw all the decorations had disappeared on the walls, no pictures and no carpet. ...read more.

Conclusion

"I was scared, I didn't know what to do," I begged, "I didn't mean to. I am a different person now." "I know, this is why this is happening, you have to prove that you have changed, you must realise how much hurt you caused, convince yourself you have changed for the better and you will be accepted into the house. The rest of the ghosts appeared, "Your time has come," a man said with a sword in his hand. I stood up full of fear and as he drew back his sword I shouted at the top of my voice "I've changed, I've changed, I've changed, I'VE CHANGED." As the blade of the sword cut into my flesh and I fell to the ground. I was woke up as I fell out of my bed that morning, I got out of bed and felt as if a huge burden had been lifted of my shoulders and felt happier than I have ever been. One year later and I had not seen another ghost or had another dream. DANIEL OGDEN ...read more.

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