The super, scaring, sightseeing adventure.

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The super, scaring, sightseeing adventure.

The cable car jerked forward unsteadily. It halted. The ancient cables beginning to corrode. The thirty people inside yelling and screaming with terror. They began to panic! The cable car started to move a fraction at a time it proceeded.

The boy who was watching with fear noticed the cable car said

“Warning; 25 people maximum”

His body began to shake and shiver more and more. The boy was about 5ft 2, with dark hair and brown eyes. The freezing weather was getting to him, although he tried to buck up, he also tried rubbing his hands together to heat up. Jim noticed the cable car above his head.

The cable car now began to sway with the horrific wind. The yelling and shouting got boisterous and became deafening. The thunderous wind made the cable car jerk forward and backwards. The thirty now shouting desperately for help!

Jim was trying to make out what the woman in the cable car was saying. The women had dark hair, with what looked like blue eyes; it was hard to tell from that distance. The woman was saying

Join now!

“Call…”

Jim could not make out what the woman was saying. Jim shouted pardon him self-competing with the thunderous wind. She said again

“Call the…” He still couldn’t make out what she was instructing him to do. He yelled again, this time he luckily made out what the woman said. She instructed him to call the emergency services. Jim didn’t have a mobile phone what was he going to do?

Jim looked up the immense gust made the cable car shift again. It was quite fast; the ancient cables could not hold the weight any longer ...

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