The Thunderstorm.

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James Major

G.S.C.E English Coursework

Fiction Task

The Thunderstorm

         It was a warm morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. The sun was rising from the far west; it was forming an orange glow over the rubble of houses.

         Last night was one of the worst nights of my life. In fact I am surprised that I am even alive at this point! My life was always at risk I hid and ran and took cover but no matter what I was doing it found me.

          It all began yesterday at noon. There was a low front coming from North, and I was sitting in my room enjoying the salvages and comforts that a home provides. I was watching my TV when my programme was interrupted by a brief broadcast. It warned us that, the most horrendous, vile most destructive thunderstorm ever, was coming in with the low front.

         No one paid that much attention to the warning, I came to this conclusion by realising that when I was out with my friends, everybody else in the town was out to. We stayed out until about 10:30, because it had started to rain then. We said goodbye setting off in different directions, I was unaware that I would never see all of them together again.

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        I was at home trying to sleep; by about this time it was 11:00. It was impossible! The wind had started to blow at a tremendous speed and unearthing small trees. The rain was torrential. The thunder was piercing the sound barrier growing even louder, I felt as though my eardrums were about to burst. The lighting was so blinding even moles would be able to see it! I was terrified.

         I was home alone for my mum had gone to a business meeting, cross-country. Even though I knew my mum ...

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