The Underworld

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Olivia Dueser

English coursework                16.9.05

The Underworld

By Olivia Dueser

Task:

In Dorris Lessing’s story Jerry goes through the tunnel into his own life. Use this as a basis for your own piece of imaginative writing which has as its pivot an experience which transforms, or changes, your central character. Describe this event, or experience, as its aftermath.

The boy in the dark hooded jumper knew he made a mistake, yet he sat deep in the dark, forgotten carriage of the underground. As the hourglass of the journey started to run, the forgotten carriage sank deeper and deeper into the endless, forsaken underworld. As people walked past him, they gave him a sort of unforgiving look. That was probably because of the way he hunched his shoulders forward, making him look some how mysterious and hazardous. He looked older than fifteen and was well built. He had green eyes that were like glistening emeralds in the sun.

        His name was Brian Matthews. His parents had died in a most devastating car crash when he was nine and since then he has lived with his atrocious aunt in South London. The flat that they lived in was not big or smart. Brian dropped out of school so that he could help his aunt earn money in order for them to have a home.

        All of a sudden the tube jolted so hard that Brian fell forwards like a book falling from its place. He got out of the old train and left the sinister, gloomy underworld and went back to Earth. Brian stopped at the front of Crawley station and sat on the bench, waiting for his dark master to arrive. His so called dark master was one of the wealthiest kids on the block and Brian really wanted to be like him.

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        Brian only had five pounds in his pocket. He had more money at home but he kept it in a secret box, so that one day he will have enough money to get out of his dump of a village. His other reason for wanting a lot more money was because like every other teenage boy, money was power. Money was liberty. He didn’t have any, therefore that was his reason for coming there that night. But already he knew that he shouldn’t have come. It was immoral. It was foolish, so why did he come?

        He looked at his ...

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