The Young Gunz

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The Young Gunz

Chapter 1: The Heist

“Crime, like all things has developed over the years. It’s no longer cops ‘n’ robbers. Nowadays, nothing ever runs smoothly. Everything’s more complicated and delicate.

It’s all about organisation.”

That was my pep talk. But don’t be mistaken, my boys and I were not about to enter a soccer match, oh no, we were about to do something far more profitable. My names Tommy, and today I’m robbing the Royal Bank of Scotland. I’ve got jet-black hair and brown eyes. Nothing special.  My partners in crime and dear mates are Vinny and Joey. After all threes a crowd right?

Vinny, was the brains of the group. He was an Aryan, with blue eyes and blonde hair. But behind his exterior laid a cunning and ambitious mind. On the other hand we have Joey, all gangs have that certain crazed blood lusting individual. Joey was that individual for us. He was prone to violence. He had death written all over him. His distinguishing feature was a scar running down his neck. He never told us how he got that. I wonder why…

The reason why we were about to pull this crazy feat was because of attention. I know it sounds stupid but this whole thing was a publicity stunt. There were many gangs in London, and ours was not very well known, so Vinny and me (mostly Vinny) devised a plan to get our gang noticed.

So here we are, next in line. The question was next in line for a jail sentence or a ticket to Switzerland. It all depended on what would happen in the next 5 minutes.  

We slowly reached for the guns in our back pockets, as nervous as a kid at his first day at school. Cold sweat trickled down my cheek. It must have looked as if I was crying. I then faced my fears and opened my mouth to shout the classic line “Put your hands in the air, this is a robbery” but nothing came out. I stood there frozen. Crap, I had forgotten about my phobia of speaking to crowds. Sweating like a pig, I stood there with one hand down my pants (reaching for the gun) and the other outstretched into the air, I had blood shot red eyes and a huge gaping mouth, wide open. I must have looked like an idiot. I certainly felt like one. What kind of fear is that to have for a criminal? Suddenly there was a puddle beneath me, and it wasn’t the sweat.

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 Vinny and Joey looked at me in a puzzled way; they were about to finish my job when, suddenly out of nowhere the doors came crashing down. About a dozen heavily armed men poured into the lobby. Shotguns, AK47’s, you name it they had it, and by the sound of that gunshot, they were not afraid to use them. “Put your hands in the air, this is a robbery” one of the people shouted. That line had never felt so bad, for me anyway. Obviously, these guys were well trained; they had already got the cashiers filling up their ...

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