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Theo was rushed to hospital, accident and emergency. Florence arrived soon after; He held her close to his chest, not wanting to let her go, never again. She was the only one.

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Nadine Shinya 10J - Creative writing The only one. She smiled. That was the last time she saw him, the last time shell ever get to feel his soft skin, his silky hair and the last time shell ever see into those sea blue eyes. She walked away with the memories still rattling away in her mind, she'll never forget. He was the only one for her, the only one that understood what was going on behind that smile. Now he's gone, no longer there for her to talk to. "Why now" she said to herself softly. "Why me?" is the words that she kept repeating to herself, she'll never live trough it. Well, not without him that is. Florence didn't contemplate that it was not just her she needed to think about. Her boyfriend, her bestfriend. Just died and it seemed as if it meant nothing. Just another day gone by. It seemed as if it didn't occur to her. "He's gone forever", said Flo's dad John. She didn't want to think in that way. She pretended he walked out on her, "he'll be back someday, I know it" is what she said. ...read more.

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It was weird. Theo got home and as soon as he did he searched his drawers for his mobile. He had Florence on speed dial. And as you could guess she was number one there was no one else that mattered as much as she did. Florence's mobile vibrated. She took one look and her eyes turned away. She had the urge to pick it up. But she didn't. She didn't know what to say to him. Why did she run off, she couldn't lie to him? Her feelings for Stephen weren't gone just yet. Theo left it, all night he pondered about what he should do, should he just forget about it all or confront her. Tears ran slowly down his cheek, this girl wasn't just someone he wanted to forget, he knew she was the one and wasn't going to let her go this quickly. As for Florence she tried to forget and went to bed without knowing that something awful was going to happen the next morning. Theo woke up 7:00am sharp. He had a reason; he was going to see the girl he loved but he felt as if he shouldn't. ...read more.

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Theo's dad was in the clear he wasn't stupid enough to leave the seat belt hanging. But nor was Theo it wasn't because he didn't want to, it was because he forgot; his mind was focused on seeing Florence again. Theo was rushed to hospital, accident and emergency. Florence arrived soon after; He held her close to his chest, not wanting to let her go, never again. She was the only one. They both embraced, the world moving around them. The whole universe didn't matter, all but one thing, which should have been clear all along. He brushed his hand across her face, holding her head in his hand, feeling her hair in his fingers. She closed her eyes, pulling one hand up to hold his hand to her face. She opened her eyes, and they looked at each other, they didn't say anything. But yet they both understood. "I love you," he whispered into her ear. She squeezed his hand and held him closer, his hearts beating with hers. "I love you too," she whispered back, she wanted to relive there relationship all over again. Erase what went wrong so she could spent the rest of her time with the one the only one. ...read more.

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