• Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

They all say the large abandoned bedroom hotel beside the lake is haunted

Extracts from this document...


´╗┐Creative Writing The Hotel They all say the large abandoned bedroom hotel beside the lake is haunted,?Never Ghosts are not real? which me and Brian claim, ?yes it was dark , gloomy and spooky but Ghosts come on seriously? it was once a highly successful business ran by a rich family over 250 years ago,now nobody dares to go near as it is believed that one night the whole family was murdered, and robbed, and the husband and wife of the hotel now haunt it and guard what is rightfully theirs and anyone who enters will be killed and have their souls placed in one of the empty rooms. It is also believed that 6 children about 20 years after the death of the family where playing hide and seek in the hotel and none of them ever returned however after ...read more.


While the old damaged building glared at me . The first hour or so wasn't actually all that bad. It just looked like a old normal building we were just exploring around and nothing exciting drew our attention apart from a carving in the wall which stated 1.30am. We didn?t think anything of this to begin with. It was just how you would expect an old building to be we didn't even need our flash-lights as there was a gaping hole in the roof and the moon shined over the dark hotel. At this moment we thought we was right , its all made up we said , but oh how wrong we were . Around 12:30am came and the bright glowing moon vanished almost immediately, and it almost felt like the running water from the lake had vanished , You could ...read more.


Suddenly there was a loud crash coming from the door opposite of us and the groaning noises turned into screams, the hairs on my neck stood up while Brian yelled ? LETS GET OUT OF HERE NOW? well that was what he said in nice terms , I have never heard him swear the way he did at this point, but I somehow calmed him down and the groaning noises suddenly stopped. We remained silent. Then we heard an old grandfather clock sound ticking along , I looked at my watch it was 1:30am , something inside of us made us approach the door which the clock and the screaming sounds were coming from and I placed my hand on the old rusty door knob......................... ...read more.

The above preview is unformatted text

This student written piece of work is one of many that can be found in our GCSE Writing to Inform, Explain and Describe section.

Found what you're looking for?

  • Start learning 29% faster today
  • 150,000+ documents available
  • Just £6.99 a month

Not the one? Search for your essay title...
  • Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

See related essaysSee related essays

Related GCSE Writing to Inform, Explain and Describe essays

  1. The Haunted House

    It made me curious. Why was this the only thing in the whole room which was covered? What was under the white sheet? I was just about to reveal answers to my questions as I reached out to uncover the object when...

  2. Original Writing - Haunted Hotel

    I wasn't sure about my family that did the recognized this place. My heart stared pumping fast; I went in met all my cousins and sat in a corner with my friends and cousins.

  1. The Hotel is My Sanctuary

    The language was foreign. Disruption and distress ran through my mind, I didn't know what was happening. The voice changed to English and then it hit me, it was the driver talking to us through the tanoy. Tranquillity was restored to my body. My feelings and emotions during the day had varied so much;

  2. My visit to the Lake District.

    That afternoon we unpacked all our bags and walked to the small village by where we were staying. At around 6p.m we returned and watched television until ten when we decided to go to bed. The following morning we got up about ten and decided what we were going to do.

  1. Old Ghosts.

    'My poor dead darling.' Jim avoids the supermarket. It's too complicated. Grim checkout people urgent to get home. Kids breathing asthma. Babes bawling immediate needs. Bald headed young men pushing forward, rings in their ears, rape in their shiftless eyes. Never stare back. Girls demanding more. Car parks cluttered with stress earned money.

  2. The Haunted Ride

    I was getting distressed because of the pieces. I was really terrified, the ride was going really slowly and I just wanted it to go fast so I could get out of there. My heart was beating fast because I was worried that something was going to happen to me, but I prayed that it wouldn?t come true .The ride started to go slower.

  • Over 160,000 pieces
    of student written work
  • Annotated by
    experienced teachers
  • Ideas and feedback to
    improve your own work