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The Secret Life of

Aftab Chaudhry

BANG, BANG! the sound of shotgun bullets were flying through the air as we chased the once notorious Salloo brothers through back streets of L.A we were right on their heels as right at that moment a bullet went into the older brother Jeano. He fell to the floor with a loud thud I walked up to him and said “where`s the money jeano ?"

      “You may as well shoot me I`m not going to tell anyone,”Jeano replied

      “It`s a shame me and you could have made good partners, waste him boys” I walked off and the sounds of gun fire started in the background.

       “What are you doing You cut the desk!” shouted Mr Watt

I stopped and noticed I had sawed through the work desks BANG BANG! Juddered the two parts of the desk. As fellow classmate hammered a nail in to a piece of wood “Are you listening, stay after the bell!” In around ten minutes the bell rang and I ran off. A few lesson went past the lessons before lunch was English and we had a free so we were watching a film the film was The Fast and The Furious as it started…

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     I started to walk towards the door of my Nissan skyline Gt-r  I pulled open the door and drove to the drag race as I approached with my car I saw a lot of people who I had beaten in a race I went to the front to see who I was racing the guy had a Mustang I  was thinking that this guy would be a push over as I sat in my car I was told that the guy wanted to play for pink slips I agreed and said “hand over your keys kid”

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