To what extent does Williams portray Blanche as a tragic heroine in Scene 1?

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Although there are many different viewpoints on a tragic hero, Aristotle made his views clear that a hero must fall from fortune and power, with a tragic flaw allowing the reader to empathise with the character. It is difficult to determine whether Blanche has these qualities from scene one, however there are clear signs that she is far from a conventional heroine.

Williams has Blanche first enter the play in a naïve and shocked manner to display her lack of power and insecurity in society.  As Blanche enters New Orleans, it is made clear that ‘her appearance is incongruous’ as Williams immediately presents her as an outsider to the community. The image Williams creates of her ‘carrying a valise’ whilst wearing a ‘fluffy bodice’ is a stark contrast to the urban surroundings and the ‘easy intermingling of races’. Williams does this to encourage the audience to question her belonging in society, wondering why the main character has so little in common with the setting of the play. This lack of power makes it clear to the audience that Blanche is not a tragic heroine, with her reversal of fortune being hard to foresee. Therefore Williams uses Blanche’s strange entrance to New Orleans to emphasise her lack of heroic qualities.

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Williams uses Blanche’s hypocritical actions about alcohol to remove any pity the audience may have for her addiction. As Blanche first enters Stella’s apartment, Williams focuses on the stage directions as ‘she carefully replaces’ the whisky bottle – this is the first signal to the audience that Blanche may have an alcohol addiction. However, any pity and relation the audience may feel is quickly depleted when we see Blanche ‘shaking all over’ as she lies that ‘one’s my limit’. Although there is a sense of Blanche’s hamartia being her alcoholism, Williams removes any pity we have as she constantly contradicts ...

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This essay is structured well. Having a clear introduction allows the essay to stay focused on the definition of a tragic hero. Each paragraph adds to the argument, and has a clear signpost which makes it clear to the examiner what is being added. I liked how the conclusion was sharp, as it is often a problem at GCSE level with people sitting on the fence. It is clear that this essay believes that Blanche isn't a tragic hero, and is able to justify this through the analysis used. The style is strong and allows for a convincing argument, but once in a while the language used is colloquial such as "her fancy clothes". Spelling, punctuation and grammar are flawless.

The analysis in this essay is strong, having a sustained focus on the audience response. I liked how there was a clear focus on Blanche's appearance, however I would've secured this analysis further by simply mentioning "stage presence". Whenever you analyse plays, it's key to show an awareness of the dramatic effect on stage. There is perceptive analysis when discussing Blanche's alcoholism, saying this is a possible hamartia. If I were doing this essay, I would've explored how a contemporary audience would respond to an alcohol addiction, posing the question whether this problem is an era of more modern tragedies. The language analysis in the fourth paragraph is strong, and the good embedding of quotes allows for close analysis of Williams' techniques. Technical terms such as monosyllabic are used well, and I like how there is a focus on the use of fragmented speech. Showing a strong awareness of language techniques will allow you to gain high marks for analysis.

The essay engages superbly with the question, having a clear argument that Blanche is not a tragic heroine by Williams' presentation in scene one. I liked how a clear definition of a tragic hero was identified in the introduction, as this allows the essay to remain focused on "a fall from fortune and power". With tragedy, there are numerous definitions, so I would always advise defining it in the introduction to maintain a focused and convincing argument.