Tower of terror

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Tower of terror

Darkness swooped over me as the doors to death became closer.  The pool of blood in which I lay was sticky and viscous almost as if gluing me to the floor.  I could no longer move!  Panic, fear, loneliness, pain and anger simultaneously engulfed me in streams of thought I could no longer process.  What happened? How did I get here? Then it all came rushing back………….

“Hey Alisha wait for me!” I turned around to see my best-friend gasping as she ran behind me shouting, sweaty, red and panting with her red curly hair, bouncing as much as ever.

“Hi Tanya”, I muffled as I gave my best friend a big hug.  Since I started going out with Max I had rarely spent time with her.  The truth is I missed her, but was totally fascinated by the new boy in town, Max.  I had met him a month ago and it seemed like we were dating for years, he was an easy-going down-to-earth kind of guy, intellectual and also carried himself with a hint of mysteriousness.  Most strikingly were his Spanish/Italian looks, tanned skin, which always glowed, long brown hair and the most dreamy green eyes which almost all the girls in the school had fallen for.  Although he looked like he had emerged right out of the 70’s, he was cuter and smarter than most of the guys in Mill Valley.  He was almost too good to be true but I was not complaining, although Tanya was!

“Hello stranger, so you do remember me!” Tanya said with the slightest of sarcasm followed by a big smile.  

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“I’m really sorry I…I. Tanya…you know…I”, I stuttered profusely, I did not know what to say, only but a month earlier I was hanging out with her, shopping, cinemas, sleep-overs, but now we had this distance, which although I wanted to, I could not fill.

“Hey I know I’m not a good kisser like Max and not half as good-looking, but hey girl I miss ya”.

“I know, I know, OK what do you say we go for some ice-cream now and catch up? It’s on me!” I locked my arms into hers and gave a little tug.

“Are you ...

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