Trapped. Snow started to tumble off the top of the mountains. The world came toppling down. Even though it was crumbling and collapsing at a super high speed

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Adam Hatton 10AY

Trapped

Whizzing down the white, chilly, snowy slopes, reaching speeds of 110kph, the cold was stinging my face. I weaved in and out of trees down the horrifyingly high mountain. Gliding along on a 1 inch snowboard, I could taste the ice cold snow flickering up into my mouth. I was half blind as it stuck to the front of my blue goggles, which it was obscuring my view.

My friend, Joe, was right behind me. I could just see the rising ramp ahead. I squatted slightly to prepare for and easy elevation. I hit the metal hard and lost balance. As I flew through the air, the white dust was swept off my goggles. Then I realised I was spinning around 30 feet in the air. The world spun past as I plummeted like deadweight. Joe was screaming, his voice fading louder and quieter as I was changing directions. Slam! I hit the ground. Even though the white powder-like snow is soft, it felt like I’d smashed straight into a concrete floor. I tumbled down into a tall tree trunk. There was an immense, sharp pain in my right arm and left leg. It felt like someone was jabbing them with metal needles.

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Joe was still screaming, screaming loud. His shouts were echoing all round this isolated valley. The ground started to rumble and quiver like a hungry belly. Snow started to tumble off the top of the mountains. The world came toppling down. Even though it was crumbling and collapsing at a super high speed, faster than a motor cross bike. I lay immobile. Motionless as this 500 tonne, white bird of prey came sweeping down, only, I was it’s prey… As layer upon layer of this snow waterfall fell, I just stared at it helplessly. The burning feeling from my ...

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