Twist in an original fairytale story : Rapunzel

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6/10/2012

Twist in an original fairytale story : Rapunzel

Once upon a time, in the depths of a couniferious forest, there lived a witch who was very young. She resided in a large house with so much wealth that she had no idea what to do with. Her greatest love however, was plantation of different herbs. There was one herb especially which she adored the most because it was made with a magic spell and tasted amazingly well. That herb was called ‘Rapunzel’

One day, when the witch discovered a strange man ripping some off the ‘Rapunzel’ plant she was vey upset. Marching up to the sneaky peasant ‘what do you think you’re doing?!’ she yelled. ‘You have no right sneaking through my garden and pulling up my priceless herbs! I have it in my mind to report you to the police immediately! Explain yourself young man!’ The man was so surprised that he fell to the ground in fear. He proceeded to mumble that his wife had just turned 8 months pregnant and her wife was overwhelming craving for ‘Rapunzel’.  The witch sighed, even though she was annoyed with  the man for his burglary, she was sympathetic to his situation. So, she proposed a compromise. If she could have the honor of naming their child, he could have enough Rapunzel to last for his wife till the childs born. Seeing as a pregnant wife is not a patient one, the husband quickly agreed. He grabbed the Rapunzel and scurried home.

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About two months later, the witch travelled to the peasant’s home to fulfill her demand. She was appalled at the condition of the estate at which she arrived. The roof was full of holes, the lawn was over grown with weeds and there was trash littered everywhere that it gave the appearance of a garbage dump. Walking down the barely visible path with utter disgust, the witch knocked on the the door to discover that it was already opened. There in the living room was the husband, the witch could tell that he was intoxicated and drunk. Wading through the ...

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