unseen written story dracula

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Ali Greenfield                 English- Mrs Lockwood                               30 Nov. 07

Unseen written story

Dracula-plan

Introduction.

Intro – S

et the scene introduce the characters and explain there background. Next paragraph show a little suspense and action and show the goodies from the badies. Try to give it some atmosphere and use descriptive language to show the level of monstrosity and fear and tension.

Introduction

The black night which falls over Transylvania conceals many dark mysteries. On the mountain top a legend was born, some say it is a myth but many have fallen beneath it, it is called Count Dracula, a blood sucking animal, but looks no different from you or me.

  Our story begins in Mexico where a young valiant man named Van Helsing kills vampires for a living. Vampires, they say, are a weaker form of Dracula but still kill the innocent to suck their blood.

  Van Helsing has set out to vanquish all the blood sucking creatures. Back in Mexico where Van Helsing is on a hunt; jumping and leaping through the town lit by night, chasing a vampire. Van Helsing shot three darts from his crossbow; two hit the creature, dripping blood everywhere. Suddenly, the creature turns snatches the crossbow, rapidly Van Helsing uses hand to hand combat. This bloody battle is getting dangerously close to the end then stab… Van Helsing stood up with his dagger penetrating the vampire’s heart. The vampire slowly died as the blood drained out of its veins.

 “That’s one less vampire off the face of the earth” announced Van Helsing, to his right hand man Gimbulton. Gimbulton replied “Maybe we should head back”.

 As they returned to their hideout, they realized they had come back to a war zone, all their priceless inventions scattered everywhere like broken body parts.

 “Look a note!” said Gimbulton nervously.

 The note read “Its time to face your fear, you possess something of great value which you will bring back to my possession and just in-case you try to destroy it I have something of yours, a young beautiful woman who you know very dearly”

The look on Van Helsing was very uneasy and anxious,

 “We must go!” exclaimed Van Helsing

“But were?” Gimbulton replied,

 Van Helsing held up the back of the letter where an address was written.

 Gimbulton managed to find weapons and items that survived the carnage, so they set off for the first boat to Transylvania. On the journey Van Helsing pulled out half of a map, “What is that?” questioned Gimbulton,

“It is the one half of a map which leads to the other half of the map, we will find the other half in south of Africa were it’s hidden by an old friend.”

That night in their cabin the boat came to an abrupt halt. Van Helsing grabs his Smith & Weston Pistol Revolver customized to hold twenty silver titanium bullets, he woke Gimbulton and checked out the drama outside.

“Everyone stay away from port side.”

Suddenly a huge gigantic colony of sharks attacked the boat, the sharks eyes were blood red, they each torpedoed into the side of the boat; Van Helsing jumped to the lower deck and shot a barrage of bullets at the sharks, two of the sharks were pierced but it did not seem to slow the sharks, instead it made them more violent and bad tempered. Gimbulton pulled three circular objects out of his bag and threw them in the water near the blood thirsty sharks,

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 “Van Helsing shot the sticky bangs!” Shouted Gimbulton, Van Helsing, with pin point accuracy, fired at the sticky bangs. The noise of piercing rockets filled the air. The sound was so deafening, the surface of the water vibrated and caused a 30 ft. high tidal wave. Suddenly the sharks darted off and the water settled. The boat took some damage but it was able to last the night.

“Well that was unexpected!” Yawned Gimbulton as they both returned to their cabins.

 ‘Thump’ the boat struck land, they were in Africa, as they were leaving the boat the captain ...

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