War Torn. I trudged back to base not knowing what tomorrow would bring and as to the extent of how lucky I am to escape with my life.

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Candidate Name: Taranveer Atwal   Candidate Number: 6014

War Torn

The mighty sun’s rays made me feel as though I was in another world; the searing heat was overpowering as I struggled to fight on in the barren desert. My life was transfixed as I failed to take in the sheer overwhelming aurora of what was going on around me which causing me to go crazy, I just didn’t have the verve to march on. The Taliban were homing in on us and it was a matter of life of death with the pride of my nation hanging by the threads of my neck. We advanced into the compound and somehow I was attracted to the danger, the spur of the moment generated testosterone which fuelled my desire of taking down the enemy. I wasn’t going to fall now at the final hurdle;

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I owed this to my nation, wife and her majesty to defeat the antagonist and bring peace and prosperity to the local Afghans. I continued to endure the radiant glow of the fiery ball in the sky which had become a constant battle of oppression and was making this seemingly impossible task al the lot harder. I kept sweating like a pig as we climbed up on to the roof top, which from here gave us an unprecedented view of the surrounding areas. The bullets kept on coming in and they almost hit my head but I managed to ...

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