What's at the end of my garden? (English personal writing fiction)

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Nina Vadjarajanian

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Mrs Matchett

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What’s at the end of my garden?

(English personal writing fiction)

‘Darling, have you finished the washing up yet?’ asked mother.

I did not reply. I was too distracted by the moving bush at the end of the garden.  I could not understand, as there were no trees moving, nor was there any wind. I was just perplexed by this.

        I felt a shiver down my spine believing there was something there. I had a sudden rush of excitement. What was at the back of the garden? I was surrounded by darkness and scared to go out alone, I could not go, so I waited until morning. The next day I woke up extra early I think it was about 6:30 am and looked out my bedroom window at the bushes and I did not see anything moving so I decided to explore.

        I ran down the stairs and said, ‘I’m going out, be back in a minute!’ I rushed out and headed for the bushes next to the tool shed. My heart was thumping against my rib cage. I had imagined all night what was behind the bushes and became very excited. I quickly pulled back the bushes and I screamed; ‘Aha!’.

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 Much to my disappointment there was nothing there at all. I left there shortly after believing it must have been a wild animal. My imagination must have taken over.

In the evening I began daydreaming out of the window, hoping that the creature would come back, and it did. I looked out the window to find the bushes moving again this time, much faster than before. I was ecstatic that the creature had returned. I thought this is my chance to catch it out.

        I hurriedly put on my coat and took my father’s torch and ran as fast as ...

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