You have been offered one thousand pounds as a bet, by a friend, to spend the night in a haunted house. Write about the thoughts, feelings and experiences that you felt through the night.

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Tara Mundy        11a Dr. Kavanagh         1/10/2004

You have been offered one thousand pounds as a bet, by a friend, to spend the night in a haunted house. Write about the thoughts, feelings and experiences that you felt through the night.

I stared at the forgotten ruin as my taxi pulled up outside. It reminded me of a tombstone in a graveyard, overcome with vines; twisting around it like a snake trying to kill its prey. I got out.

“   5.55 please mate” stated the cab driver.

 I exchanged money with him and he drove off. I looked up upon this house with great discomfort.

‘ Why on earth did I agree to this bet? Spend a night in an old rotten “haunted” house!”’ My mind pondered.

I stepped up to the front door, which had been populated with cobwebs and spiders. An old rusty chain hang down swinging in the breeze twined with vines, which I assumed, was the doorbell. I pulled it. I made a loud CLANG that shook the whole house, echoing from every crevice. A light suddenly appeared from the crease of the door. It creaked open revealing an old frail man with a candlestick in his hand. He stood there looking at me with his cold eyes penetrating deep into my skin.

“ Hello, you must be Mr. Edding. I have been expecting you.” He said eerily with a perplexing smile, which followed with a hand gesture to show me into the hallway. I stepped forward into the dimly lit room, with a mahogany floor and floral décor.

Along the surrounding walls hung a number of large portraits of men, which looked as if they were apart of a cavalry. There was also two long staircases situated either side of the room, which married together at the top forming the landing.

“ One night is it Mr. Edding?” asked the old man

“Err… yes. One night.” I replied

“ Excellent! Now let me show you where you will be sleeping tonight. Follow me” he said mysteriously.

He escorted me up the staircase, which had a row of portraits situated along the walls of the stairs.

He showed me to my room. The third door on the right. It was a small room with a cast iron bedstead and the same mahogany floor. This wasn’t the only trait that followed into every room in the house. A painting of a lady. Her hair was bright with sunshine, but she wore a stern, earnest look that her small curved nose made her almost hawk-like.

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“ I will leave you now Mr. Edding to get settled.  Dinner will be served at 8pm.” Said the old man.

“ Thank you, I’ll remember that.”

He turned away and put his hand onto the knob of the door, he was shutting the door but he stopped in his wake,

“ By the way Mr. Edding, do not even think about wondering around. You’ll never know, something might happen.  If you understand, what I mean?” he said strangely with hysterical laughter.

“Yeah…” I said nervously.

He shut the door and I could hear his incessant laughter echoing ...

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