ASSISI - CRITICAL EVALUATION

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ASSISI – CRITICAL EVALUATION

Q:        Choose a poem in which the poet has put across a definite point of view.  By close reference to the poetic techniques used, show how successful the poet has been in making you share his/ her point of view.

“Assisi” by Norman MacCaig is an intriguing and thought-provoking poem, which has put across a definite point of view to me which I believe is that all people should be treated equally and we should try to help those less fortunate than ourselves.  In this essay I will show how successful the poet has been in making me share his point of view, with the help of literary techniques such as language, word – choice and imagery.

Norman MacCaig has put across a definite point of view for me and has been successful in making me share this view by using thoughtful and intense language.  The first aspect of language, which he uses is metaphor in the beginning of the poem when he is describing the dwarf sitting outside the church.  He uses metaphor as he says,

        “The dwarf with his hands on backwards

          Sat, slumped like a half – filled sack

          On tiny twisted legs from which

          Sawdust might run.”

The metaphor here of the dwarf sitting like a ‘half filled sack’ is describing the dwarf and how he has a deformed body.  He is being compared to looking like a sack, which is slumped and half empty.  This is effective as it seems as though the dwarf cannot help himself and he is sitting there waiting for help.  MacCaig tells us that he is a dwarf therefore he will be very short and “hands on backwards” and “tiny twisted legs” portrays his deformity as I can envisage his legs dangling from his body.  Also as he is sitting like a “half –filled sack” it seems to me that he cannot do anything for himself.  In addition the tone in this metaphor is a sad and sympathetic one as it illustrates a man sitting needing help but no one is helping him.  

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In addition, another aspect of language, which MacCaig uses to put across his point of view to me, is alliteration.  The poet uses this in stanza three when he refers to the tourists who ignored the dwarf and went after the priest, who was also ignoring the dwarf as he says,

        “A rush of tourists, clucking contentedly,

         Fluttered after him as he scattered

         The grain of the word.”

By using these lines and the technique of alliteration of the letter C, MacCaig is alluding to the parable of the sower when the seed fell on the path ...

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