Tourism in Greece

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Humza Hanif        English Homework BY10 Info about tourism in Greece  Greece mainland and the Greek islands are one of the favourite holiday destinations in Europe. In fact, Greece comes in the 15th place in the world rating of tourist destinations, since, according to the National Statistical Service of Greece, it receives more than 15 million tourists every year, after countries such as the USA, China, Spain and Great Britain.Most tourists come to Greece from Europe, especially the EU countries, and from the USA, while fewer originate from the other continents. In 1989 and 1991, approximately 90% of the tourists to Greece were Europeans, in particular German and British citizens. Until the mid-1990s, the tourism flow in Greece would not surpass 8 or 9 million; however, 1994 was a determinant
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year for Greek tourism because more than 10 million people chose Greece and the wonderful Greek islands to spend their summer vacations.Greece is a famous country, popular for its clean beaches and its long history. There are hundreds of archaeological and historical sites to visit in Greece that gloriously depict the country’s past. Its landscape is mainly mountainous and the terrain is not very fertile, except for some valleys scattered along the Greek mainland. However, Greece is surrounded by water, in particular the Aegean and the Ionian Sea. The country consists of more than 1,400 islands and islets, but only ...

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Punctuation, grammar and spelling good throughout with minor grammatical errors towards the end. The format of the piece is good, but the tone needs to be a lot more formal as an analysis of the tourist industry.

The essay starts with a good range of figures based on the ranking of tourism in Greece on a larger scale. They spot trends in their second paragraph and show an understanding of how the tourism in greece rose in certain points, although to expand they should produce reasons for this, and why tourists come from certain destinations. They mention some of the attractions of Greece which is good, their their language is too 'flowery' and should be kept subdued. The essay isn't very professionally done towards the end.

The essay is done well. It look on a range of aspects of the tourism industry and the trends within it. I would like to see deeper analysis of the figures, and the reasons for the different trends and the impacts different things had on the economy. This would show a deeper understanding of the topic.