Volcanoes Location Page 1
Why did they erupt? Page 2
Human Impact Page 3
Physical Impact Page 4
Similarities & Differences Page 5
Conclusion Page 6
Bibliography Page 7
The volcano, Fuji, is found on the southern Honshu Island in Japan. It is the largest and most popular volcano in Japan, rising to 12,388 feet (3,776 m) above sea level and has a perimeter base of 50km. Fuji is a typical cone shaped volcano and has kept its shape for around 5,000 years. Fuji consists of three different volcanoes called Komitake, Ko-Fuji and Fuji which lie one upon the other.
Mount Vesuvius is a volcano in the east of Naples in Italy. The volcano is over 17 000 years old and is still at this moment, active. It is only 4190 feet tall (1277 m) with a base of 48km (3 miles) but its past eruptions have been very dangerous, killing a vast amount. So far Vesuvius has had 50 eruptions and in only one of these eruptions, it has killed over 3 000 people.
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Minor spelling mistakes in places. Spelling, grammar and punctuation all to a decent level in spite of this. Tone of this essay is good, and the format is large and essay to read.
Level of analysis
The introduction is done well with the description of what type of volcanoes the ones being investigated are and where they lie. To improve the candidate could include where they lie next to fault lies, and how their activity compares. The candidate moves on to compare the location, how this influences the eruption and devastation the volcano can cause which is good, but rather than them being stand alone topics the candidate should really contrast and compare between the two. They do contrast similarities and differences to a basic level of detail. The conclusion is not really adequate because it does not bring together the essay and what they have investigated.
Response to question
The candidate answers the question moderately well. They describe the different volcanoes well, although the level of detail is lacking in places, and could be analysed a bit deeper, and they compare and contrast the volcanoes to a limited degree.