Volcanoes - Comparing Mount Fuji and Vesuvius

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Volcanoes Location                  Page 1

Why did they erupt?                 Page 2

Human Impact                          Page 3

Physical Impact                        Page 4

Similarities & Differences        Page 5

Conclusion                                Page 6

Bibliography                             Page 7

The volcano, Fuji, is found on the southern Honshu Island in Japan. It is the largest and most popular volcano in Japan, rising to 12,388 feet (3,776 m) above sea level and has a perimeter base of 50km. Fuji is a typical cone shaped volcano and has kept its shape for around 5,000 years. Fuji consists of three different volcanoes called Komitake, Ko-Fuji and Fuji which lie one upon the other.

Mount Vesuvius is a volcano in the east of Naples in Italy. The volcano is over 17 000 years old and is still at this moment, active. It is only 4190 feet tall (1277 m) with a base of 48km (3 miles) but its past eruptions have been very dangerous, killing a vast amount. So far Vesuvius has had 50 eruptions and in only one of these eruptions, it has killed over 3 000 people.

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The volcano is moderately young but has erupted several times and most of these eruptions have been somewhat large in size, but overall, Fuji has had 2 mainly damaging eruptions. Any volcanic eruption is normally caused by plate boundaries. Mount Fuji is an island-arc volcano which means that three plates are converging; the Philippine Sea plate, the Eurasian plate and the Okhotsk plate. The volcano’s latest and most damaging eruption was in 1707 called The Hoei Eruption which started as an earth quake on the 11th of ...

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Minor spelling mistakes in places. Spelling, grammar and punctuation all to a decent level in spite of this. Tone of this essay is good, and the format is large and essay to read.

The introduction is done well with the description of what type of volcanoes the ones being investigated are and where they lie. To improve the candidate could include where they lie next to fault lies, and how their activity compares. The candidate moves on to compare the location, how this influences the eruption and devastation the volcano can cause which is good, but rather than them being stand alone topics the candidate should really contrast and compare between the two. They do contrast similarities and differences to a basic level of detail. The conclusion is not really adequate because it does not bring together the essay and what they have investigated.

The candidate answers the question moderately well. They describe the different volcanoes well, although the level of detail is lacking in places, and could be analysed a bit deeper, and they compare and contrast the volcanoes to a limited degree.