A super volcano is a mega colossal volcano that erupts at least 1,000km3 of material. Super volcanoes do not look like a volcano with a characteristic cone. Instead, they have a large depression called a caldera, often marked by a rim of higher land around the edges. Beneath the caldera is a huge magma chamber, where all the magma is stored before the volcano erupts.
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Punctuation, grammar and spelling are all to a good clear level. Paragraphing is done well and the tone fits the piece. The images do not aid the topic so should be left out if not needed.
Level of analysis
The candidate starts with good definitions of a supervolcano and what defines them in this status. They explain terms well and clearly. They identify current signs with the volcano they are investigating but they should supply a picture of regions of the volcano, such as 'Norris' so the reader has an idea of what Norris actually is. They do not explain the deeper significance of the findings which would have shown greater understanding of volcanic concepts. They consider the regional impact of the volcano, and should explain effects that would be seen on a global level in more detail to gain better marks.
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Overall a good base essay. The candidate introduces the topic well setting out the key concepts with the volcano concerned and shows consideration of the activity and current issues of the volcano. To improve the essay should show greater consideration of the impacts the volcano may have and link the structure of the volcano to how a change in structure may indicate activity better to show deeper understanding of the topic.