Haig and the Somme - source related study

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Antoine Allen 11j

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  1. In what way may Haig’s account of the meeting with the war cabinet be biased?

There is a plethora of reasons why Haig’s account of the meeting with the War Cabinet was biased. The source may be subjective because it is a diary extract. He approached the War Cabinet to discuss his new offensive, this meant he would of wanted to bolster his himself. Haig uses robust language to illustrate is own argument, an example of this would be  ‘ I stated within 6 months…’ this shows his authoritarian tactics. Conversely Haig uses negative and dismissive language to undermine the argument of the war cabinet; this is shown in ‘ War cabinet asked many questions, all tending to show that each was more pessimistic than the last’. In addition Haig would have wanted to bolster his own personal perception of his self and his comments during the meeting, because he was a commanding Field Marshal and he was approaching the Cabinet about his new offensive.

  1.  Which of these two sources gives a more reliable view of the battle?

Source E is more reliable than source D (ii) for an abundance of reasons. It gives a fairer and less biased view of the events. This is because source D (ii) is an official telegram from Lloyd George to Field Marshall Haig. This means it would be sent to encourage Haig, as shown in ‘the War Cabinet would like to congratulate you’. In addition it would induce added pressure on him not to fail. This sources ambiguity makes it biased and subsided. Furthermore subconsciously Haig would now, be aware that the War Cabinet is under the belief that he is advancing on the enemy, so if he fails they can brand him a liar. Than nature of source E is to comment on German history and to promote national pride. Though the nature of the source is to evoke national pride, the source gives a fair and positive description of the British forces; ‘our enemies were well-prepared, greater in number and brave.’ Also the source has no reason to encourage or animate people in a war situation. Furthermore the source is from 1920s, so the historian would have been able to research on the events thoroughly. Finally it also gives a fair description of the German losses ‘losses had been so high’.

Both source D (ii) and source E comment reliably on the weather conditions. In source D (ii) the author comments on the atrocious weather conditions, for example ‘despite being hampered by the most unfavorable weather’. To corroborate source D (ii), source C shows soldiers wading through knee-high mud. Source E also gives a description of the horrific weather conditions; for instance it states ‘bad weather conditions’. Source E is backed up by source D (I); this states ‘conditions, mud, cold, rain…’

Source D (ii) has numerous shortcomings. Firstly in source D (ii) Lloyd George states the British forces made huge advances, this is illustrated in ‘ you and your men have never the less driven your enemy back with skill and courage’ this statement is challenged in a number of other sources. For instances in source B general Gough states ‘ only the shortest advance can be considered’. Another failing of the source is the statement made by Lloyd George ‘ to state again my confidence in the leadership’ but Lloyd George stated on numerous occasions, that he had no faith at all in Haig or his leadership qualities, he reinforced this in his memoirs from the 1930. Source E is more reliable because the unknown author excepts German loses if the author had not it would have proven the author was biased. This was insinuated in ‘losses had been so high that the losses could no longer be replaced’.

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In the final analysis it is clear from the evidence that source E is more reliable than source D (ii) because it gives a more representative picture of the events.

  1. Do you think Haig deserves his bad reputation as a war leader?

Broadly speaking Haig deserves the description of being a poor war leader. However it must be remembered that Haig was put under enormous pressure to be victorious quickly in the war. Also he was forced to cooperate with the War Cabinet discussion, that he did not want to cooperate with. Also he governed his own forces along ...

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