Haig Coursework B&E

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(B) Source B was written by General Haig at the beginning of the war, having read both extracts written by Haig and read the source information, I have chosen not to trust it and look at it as a reliable source. To begin with, Haig was nicknamed Chateaux General because he was located 40 miles away from the frontline, away from the risk of being in danger. Therefore, his information was not first hand, meaning he had to rely on Sir John Charters to provide him with his information. Although Sir John Charters was present at the battle, the reason why I choose to class him as unreliable is because Haig was his superior and he did not wish to upset him, therefore, he will always give him optimistic information. Also this source is unreliable because of what Haig was writing and who he was informing. This source was written to inform the British government, the Prime Minister, so consequently, Haig would put more optimism in the letters to avoid the blame for the failure of the war. Finally, he mention how the barbed wires were cut well, and how the battle was going like clockwork, when 60,000 were injured or dead and 20,000 plus were definitely dead.  The statement of the barbwire being cut well is a lie as I know from my own contextual knowledge that the barbed wire was not penetrated due to its thickness and vastness.

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Source C is an interview with Private George Coppard, already making it more reliable than source B because Private George Coppard was present at the frontline, therefore, his information is firsthand. What also makes this source reliable is the fact that he talks about real events, and I can relate to it with my contextual knowledge. However, his tone and language is very emotive; making his words seem very exaggerated, such as the barbed wire being “so thick that daylight could barely be seen through it.” And “who told them that artillery fire would pound such wire to pieces”, ...

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