GCSE: International relations 1900-1939

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To what extent was the Treaty of Versailles fair to Germany?

5 star(s)

This is a strong response which offers a balanced and systematic assessment of the fairness of the treaty. Knowledge is accurate and judgements are convincing, particularly in the conclusion. 5…
- Essay length: 913 words
- Submitted: 08/05/2011
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 01/12/2012
Why did the Germans hate the treaty of Versailles?

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This is an excellent response that stays focused on the question throughout, explains the points made and uses specific evidence to support them. All key details are addressed. 5 out…
- Essay length: 930 words
- Submitted: 08/11/2007
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 01/12/2012
Why Did The First World War Break Out in 1914?

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This is an incredibly detailed account that demonstrates excellent understanding and offers useful analysis to explain why the war breaks out. At one point, the author drifts into narrating events,…
- Essay length: 4337 words
- Submitted: 17/09/2004
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 01/12/2012
Was The Treaty Of Versailles Justified?

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The author has a hugely impressive range of accurate knowledge and expresses his ideas well. There is perhaps too much background information and one side of the argument is more…
- Essay length: 2706 words
- Submitted: 15/12/2002
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 01/12/2012
Why was the Treaty of Versailles so in Germany?

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This is a very detailed response that demonstrates excellent and precise knowledge and stays focused on the question throughout. Unfortunately it lacked a conclusion, where the key reasons for the…
- Essay length: 841 words
- Submitted: 11/07/2002
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 01/12/2012
WHICH ALLIANCE SYSTEM WAS THE STRONGEST IN 1914

4 star(s)

This is a strong response that considers both sides of the argument and stays focused throughout. The analysis could have been taken further in places and the author often slips…
- Essay length: 854 words
- Submitted: 24/11/2005
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 01/12/2012
Was the treaty of Versailles too harsh on Germany?

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This is a focused and accurate response, with a clear judgement reached. More detail was needed in places and the structure and use of language could have been improved. Overall,…
- Essay length: 624 words
- Submitted: 13/01/2004
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 01/12/2012
Were the peace treaties of 1919 - 1923 fair?

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This is a strong response that offers a good range of reasons and is balanced by considering both sides of the argument. The sub headings are unnecessary as the author's…
- Essay length: 1157 words
- Submitted: 18/09/2003
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 01/12/2012
Who was to blame for the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand in 1914?

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The student has a clear understanding of what is expected of them and answers the question very well. The answer is clearly laid out and is fluent and logical. However,…
- Essay length: 1234 words
- Submitted: 03/12/2009
- Reviewed by: crystalclearmagic 24/04/2012
Why did the treaty of versailles provoke widespread hostility among Germans?

4 star(s)

The student constantly links their answer to the question set which is very impressive at GCSE level and they support their argument well throughout. I would argue that the essay,…
- Essay length: 2113 words
- Submitted: 22/10/2003
- Reviewed by: crystalclearmagic 23/03/2012