Huriya Nazari
Assignment 1-task 2
Huriya Nazari
Assignment 1-task 2
Unit 1-task structured unstructured information
Task2
Describe what meant by terms ‘structured’ and unstructured information. Explain using the examples, the values of concerting information from one type into another
Structured
Structured information is an understandable way of writing in a formal letter or anything which makes sense and does not include any informal documents. Structured information often includes:
- Data (table)
- paragraphs (letter)
- information (newspaper, newsletter, letters and magazines)
- headings (newspaper)
- articles (newspaper, newsletter, magazines)
- title (magazines, newsletter, newspaper)
- signature (letter, contract, order form)
- address (letter, contract)
Structured information is used for different types things like:
- Teaching (making a plan for the day, written the starter, date, objective, aim, title and starter. This is often presented in PowerPoint presentation by projecting it form a computer and showing it to the audience)
- Business (to make a deed before making a partnership deal.)
- Newsletter (this is a letter which has got news form maybe a primary school)
- Newspapers (this is used to write article in the newspaper and explain what has happened on the past few days.)
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Quality of writing
The report states the term 'Structured Information', and this is explained well. In addition, the report gives an example of what structured information is, however I believe that this should be below the bullet point list, which would allow the student to explain in more detail. In addition, the report states the term 'Unstructured Information', which is similar to the above. The report states 'The difference between structured data and unstructured data is that structured data has always got a formal structure and it is very professional; an example of unstructured data is a letter.'. The last part, the student has gotten mixed up with using 'unstructured', instead of 'structured. This should be corrected within the report.
Level of analysis
The report states that two people or more may have to sign a contract, to allow the two parties to not misunderstand in the near future. Although the report, doesn't state why there could be issues. The report could include 'When two or more people work together, there might be a number of issues, as people have different work backgrounds, idea's and knowledge. All of these may disagree with some parts of the other person and this may cause an issue with the work. A contract would be in place to allow a reasonable way out of the issue, if any such event were to occur'.
Response to question
In summary, the report is quite good. The report states the definition of both structured and unstructured information, which provides examples. However the unstructured example if lacking detail. In addition, more detail could be explained regrading the differences between the two. The student shows an example of an contact (structured information), which is quite good as there are a number of annotation which explain the various elements of why the document is structured. This clearly shows the examiner, that the student understands how a document should be set out, in order for this to be structured. Further-down the report the student shows an example of an mobile phone (unstructured information). However I believe that there is a lack of annotations, and this should be explained in more detail.