There needs to an efficient method of recording income and expenditure , including a facility which will help him to decide on new prices in the future . This data needs to automatically be transferred into an invoice which can be printed and sent to the owner . All of this data needs to be secure Target Audience The target audience is Harry at Harry?s Boarding kennels and any other staff he has now or will employ in the future .
Good conclusions usually refer back to the question or title and address it directly - for example by using key words from the title.
How well do you think these conclusions address the title or question? Answering these questions should help you find out.
Do they use key words from the title or question?
Do they answer the question directly?
Can you work out the question or title just by reading the conclusion?
"In conclusion, it seems that, in the long term, the positive effects of enclosure outweighed the negative effects. The main reason being that without enclosure, 50 per cent of the growing population of Britain would have died of hunger. But more should have been done to help the poor farmers.
So this essay agrees. "The positive effects of enclosure outweighed the negative effects."
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