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Introduction

5-day diary

Tuesday 3rd August

Dear Diary,

               Today hasn’t been the most interesting day.  We just kicked the ball about in the park but we were forced to leave because other people, 17-18 year olds, told us to get out of the park or they would kill us.  At the time I didn’t think that they were serious, but when he started shouting I knew he was serious.  To say the least he was a bit of a psycho.  When I saw him reacting the way he did, shouting because we were in the park, I told my mates just to walk away.  I didn’t think anyone could react that way over us playing football in the park!  I don’t think I’ll be going back there if they’re around.

Wednesday 4th August

Dear Diary,

               I don’t know what way to feel.  Angry or sad.  Paul got hit today.  Well, he got more than hit.

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Thursday 5th August

Dear Diary,

              I have found out exactly what happened to Paul and who put him in a coma.  Paul and Darren went into the park to kick the ball about and those people from the other day tried to throw them out of the park.  Paul refused to leave.  He kept saying that he wasn’t going to leave the park and eventually one of the other boys lost it and hit him.  Darren ran.  I can’t blame him.  He’s the smallest one out of all of us.  He must’ve kept hitting Paul while he was down because one punch couldn’t have done that much damage.  I have to get him back.  I can’t let him get away with what he done to Paul.  He’s going to be sorry.  He’s going to be sorry that he even talked to us.  I will get him back.

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Conclusion

IF Paul, recovers.  Darren won’t leave the house.  He’s too scared.  I feel sorry for Darren too.  He couldn’t have done anything.  He must be feeling almost as bad as me.  Tomorrow is the day that I will get him back for what he has done.

Saturday 7th August

Dear Diary,

               I can’t believe what I have done.  The boy who more or less killed Paul now has multiple stab wounds.  The moment I pierced his skin once with my knife, I couldn’t stop.  My mind went blank.  I just saw red.  I didn’t know what I was doing.  I didn’t want to stop.  I couldn’t stop.  The only thing that stopped me was his mates charging at me.  I don’t even feel satisfied.  I actually feel worse.  I’m just like him.  My mates were right and now I fear for my own life…..

Sean Gregory 12L

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