• Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

Nine Fat Frogs - What can you tell about the three boys from this transcript?

Extracts from this document...

Introduction

Jonathan Hawkings

Nine Fat Frogs

1) What can you tell about the three boys from this transcript?

From this transcript, it is evident that there is a structured status in the group. One of the ways you can find this out is buy seeing which character has the most to say. Robin says the most in this passage, and this shows us that his dominance makes him the strongest in the group. There are other ways in which we can see this. Robin tends to interrupt quite often and carries on speaking following what the person before said or to change the point quickly. "Dale: there was all these slimy" "Robin: no no-yeah-and then we-and then we had some lollipops". Being able to change the point shows that Robin is in control of the conversation because he decides what the boys will talk about. The other members, Dale and Mark try to speak and add to the conversation their bits of detail to the story, but the dominance of Robin always cuts in and he carries on.

We

...read more.

Middle

There is a point in the story where Mark says "and my frog went up-rode round-round into this lady's knickers (laughter) and then this lady was going "aagh! aagh! Help me! Help me!"" The reference to the lady's knickers causes the children to laugh because they think that it is something naughty to say which would enhance the story. Use of taboo words in childrens speech often is used to create humour and also in this case, where Mark says it, it could be used to try and gain status in the conversation. The interjections used by the children such as "ugh!" and "aagh!" create an audible sense of disgust, fear, excitement and shock which builds up the attention of what’s happening in the story.

The simple language and lexical choice are mainly small words that are often polysyllabic, which shows the age of the children and their stage of development in learning vocabulary. Also purposely choosing small words helps the boys to get to the point of the story out more quickly.

2) In what ways would the language of the story be different if the boys had to write it down?

...read more.

Conclusion

The non-verbal signals such as laughter or hand movements and gestures would have to be replaced by more detail to show what was going on. This would mean controlled use of verbs and connectives to show clearly a movement. There would be no non-fluency features such as pauses or hesitations because when someone writes, they don't tend to write as they speak, although an increase of connectives could show hesitations in thinking what to say next.

As the piece of writing is being recorded down, then there would be less repetition of phrases and words as the child would tend to only record facts once but may and try to describe them in more detail. If the child knew that the piece of writing was to be read by a teacher or an older person, then they would concentrate more on how they would be constructing sentences and might even be constructing more complicated sentences.  

...read more.

This student written piece of work is one of many that can be found in our GCSE Comparing length of words in newspapers section.

Found what you're looking for?

  • Start learning 29% faster today
  • 150,000+ documents available
  • Just £6.99 a month

Not the one? Search for your essay title...
  • Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

See related essaysSee related essays

Related GCSE Comparing length of words in newspapers essays

  1. Features explaining the effectiveness of the spoken sermon and features demonstrating subtleties of communication ...

    The use of raised tone in line 13 for "workers (.h) and immediately then" is a tool for facilitating the continuity of the words. Without the tonal link, some of the meaning might be lost; by raising his tone for the end of one utterance and the beginning of another,

  2. Assesment of Reading Difficulties in Patient AM Following the Development of Vascular Dementia.

    AM was required to read these words aloud. In a non-word reading task AM was presented a list of non-words which again had to be read aloud. Image ability and frequency spelling was the next test given. The first in a series of tests looking at spelling.

  1. Introduction to English language.

    If a person only says dog, no statement is made, and no information is conveyed. A sound is made that calls to mind a common, four-footed animal, but nothing regarding it is learned. The what words are called nouns. They tell what is being talked about.

  2. how to write a good story

    Secondly alliteration which is a collection of words that have the same first letter e.g. Stephanie's Stories are Super. Thirdly metaphors, these are impressive in a story, they are a cluster of words that, when used correctly describe something unrealistically e.g.

  1. Investigation into the effect of homophone training on reaction times for a forced choice ...

    He said there was another type of non word, orthographically legal non words, which look like real words but don't sound like them. In his experiments Martin (1982) showed that when letter strings of orthographically legal non words were used in experiments demonstrating the pseudohomophone effect the effect disappeared.

  2. What Are Adjectives?

    Taking into account all these considerations we may conclude that there is no real answer to the questions raised. Is that a bad thing? Maybe a slightly different approach can help us out here. The question 'Which words belong to the class of adjectives and which not?'

  1. Modes of Modern English Vocabulary Development

    For example, mass-produce is from mass production, and ghost-write is from ghost-writer. What we talked about so far is restricted to two-stem compounds. There are many compounds which contain more than two stems. In mass media we may often come across expressions like a middle-of-the-road politician, ahead-of-schedule general election.

  2. In this investigation I am going to compare and analyse three newspapers to see ...

    The pilot study will help to decided whether there is more to investigate than at first perceptions and therefore make me carry on to the 100 words sample. I will also do a sentence length of the whole articles used in the 100 word sample to get a greater understanding

  • Over 160,000 pieces
    of student written work
  • Annotated by
    experienced teachers
  • Ideas and feedback to
    improve your own work