Compare two charity appeals and state which one is more likely to persuade you to contribute

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James Allen

Compare two charity appeals and state which one is more likely to persuade you to contribute

Researching on the appeals, I have found two items in which I am going to compare. Item one will be the tsunami earthquake, and the charity Disasters Emergency Committee. Item two will be the Hostage Crisis in Beslan, Russia in which there is an appeal to rebuild the school and area.

The tsunami earthquake I south East Asia ‘affected hundreds of thousands of people across a dozen countries’,  and the D.E.C use this to emphasise the need for help, aid and money. Nearly all ‘aid agencies’ are working together to give the best possible help and emergency relief. The appeal is set out to give the opportunity to ordinary people to donate their hard earned cash to aid all that are affected by the tsunami earthquake.

Another charity appeal that I have found to compare, the Hostage Crisis in Beslan, Russia. This may not be as colossal as the tsunami earthquake and attractive as far as donating money is concerned, although you should not under estimate the need for help. The money donated by the public will aid the help of ‘psychological and emergency health specialists’.’ The fact is that 336 people were killed during a siege on a school.’ On September 1st 2004, masked armed fighters stormed the school taking more than a thousand children, their relatives and teachers hostage. ‘Many bodies lie unrecognisable in hospital morgues, disfigured by the explosives that marred the disaster.’ The uses of facts are there to underline the appeal and show the public why they should donate.

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The tsunami earthquake appeal mainly gets straight to the point with large commanding words. They have a black background to make the advert stand out and there is a prominence on the telephone number, the main source of appealing. The appeal gives many different ways in which you can donate money, ensuring that the public have no excuse to giving. The advert also shows the benefit of donating by saying, ‘They will donate an extra twenty eight pence for every one pond given.’ Overall the appeal is very attractive in a way which makes you feel that you have ...

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