Overall we are not disappointed with our adverts but if we were given more time and a chance to redo them, there would be a few points

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After finishing each advert and listening to our final cut we were very happy with the results. However come a few days later when showing it to an audience such as friends and family we believed it might not be as effective as we hoped.

Firstly with our REM advert we were happy with the sound levels, the placements of when we spoke and the editing, as it sounded fluent and worked well. However listening to it carefully the information we tried to put across to the audience could have been better. For example nothing important was repeated, the main point of where you can get the tickets from did not sound as clear as we hoped so this lead to people not remembering much about when, where or how to see REM. Also a lot of people pointed out that the voices did not sound enthusiastic and that did not help in catching or keeping people’s attention.

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With our Suffolk Show advert again we were happy with the sound levels and the theme that we used but the information we tried to put across to the audience also let us down. We didn’t put in a telephone number or address so people would have to research up where it was. We didn’t repeat any important information and towards the end the music seemed to stop before we stopped talking so that didn’t sound as good as we hoped. However people did say that they liked the advert and could remember some information given because of the ...

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