Persuasive essay, Cosmetic surgery teaches a wrong message about self image

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Does Cosmetic Surgery teach a wrong message about self image?

Too many children today are growing up surrounded by media portrayals of the perfect body. If we don’t show realistic images through the media the next generations will be full of self-doubt. In turn this will lead to greater problems of insecurity, anxiety and depression.

So why do people harbour a need to achieve the perfect body? People are losing the right to enjoy life as they are due to ridiculous expectations forced upon us as ‘the norm’ via the media. An eating disorders website claims that we try to succumb to:

MISSION IMPOSSIBLE:

“The media plays a big part. Surrounded by thin models and TV stars, teenage girls are taught to achieve an impossible goal. As a result, many teenage girls intensely dislike their bodies and can tell you down to the minutest detail what’s wrong with it. Most teens watch an average of 22 hours of TV a week and are deluged with images of fat-free bodies in the pages of health, fashion and teen magazines. The "standard" is impossible to achieve. A female should look like, and have the same dimensions as Barbie, and a male should look like Arnold Schwarzenegger. Buff Baywatch lifeguards, the well-toned abs of any cast member of Melrose Place or Friends, and music-video queens don’t help.”

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We cannot simply sit back and accept that cosmetic surgery is the only viable solution for dissatisfaction with self-image. Cosmetic surgery is drastic, potentially dangerous and should only ever be used as a last resort. We weren’t intended to augment our own bodies. It is unnatural and scary that so many people are willing to do so, as opposed to delving into why they feel like they do.

If individuals were to open their eyes and take a look at the world around them then they would see that atrocities of resources are used to induce feelings of self-doubt ...

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An extremely eloquent and well argued text which uses both the personal and general to confront an important issue in society. ****