• Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

Original writing task

Extracts from this document...

Introduction

Original Writing Coursework-Julia Parsons Enx1 (Aimed at teenagers and young adults) Bereavement, My Story I'd perched breathlessly upon the fortress wall, my oversized, crimson coat billowing behind me like the wings of Satan. The bullet cut through the air like a knife. His blood trickled to the floor, narrowly missing my feet. He collapsed in my arms; he breathed his very last breath on my cheek. Cold, clammy fingertips dug into my flesh-scraping the surface of my skin. I dared not scream, or I'd endanger myself. The night was dark. The murky browns and cold greys of the collapsed buildings sprawled out before me; with the faint glow and safety of home barely visible on the horizon. I was alone. The embankment behind was a sheer vertical drop. Below, a stagnant river reflected the bleak, industrial structures that bordered it. Electricity pylons loomed among the buildings and network cables formed a black web which draped overhead. That previous night, I sat unaccompanied in the lounge, oblivious to the trauma I'd suffer the following evening. This room-my favourite in particular-was furnished elegantly with: a granite fireplace, solid oak flooring, tan leather couches and a large display case with pictures, books, and numerous memories of my family and friends. ...read more.

Middle

Shivering, I nervously scrutinized my surroundings, trying to overlook the prospect of spending the night in this desolate place. I had no choice. His body was contaminated with my Deoxyribonucleic acid-DNA for short. Therefore the odds of me escaping a prison sentence were one in a million! Panic began to set in. I had a troubled youth, had been admitted to young offender's institutes on countless occasions, and had no goals or ambitions. It was certain I'd be wrongly convicted of this unthinkable crime! Panting heavily, my body screamed inside, I had no escape. Behind me, lay a moribund railroad, lined with derelict carriages. One in particular, perhaps once black but now tainted grey with dust and grime, swayed frantically in the gale force winds. It was roughly fifty feet from where I was sitting. My eyes were no longer fixed upon the stars but had turned their attention the carriage-it was motionless. Despite the thick misty darkness, I observed the outline of an open door, which hung on by one rusted hinge. It did not have a handle (it had broken off many years ago) and all but one of the carriage windows were intact. ...read more.

Conclusion

At least playing all those games of musical statues alone in my room was worthwhile! However, I'd made the fatal mistake of overlooking the security light which pointed directly at the embankment. Holding my breath deeply-I almost passed out in the process. My mind began to wander back and forth between memories of my lifetime. A tear rolled down my cheek-followed by another-until my tear ducts became flood plains. It's true what they say y'know!? Your life DOES flash before your eyes! The figure grew closer and closer to where I was sat; my worst fears were confirmed. It was him. With a sudden beam of light, the entire area lit up and for the first time, I witnessed the horrors that had been hidden from my vision. I wasn't alone. Slumped before me was a man, with long mousy brown hair, thick bushy eyebrows and dark, penetrating eyes. He wore a tag, his name was Brown, first name Frederick. I felt my brain swell inside my skull, as my jaw dropped to the floor. Behind him, stood the figure of a woman, with gorgeous bouncy brunette locks and bright blue eyes that shone like the ocean. She was drenched in blood. Written by Julia Parsons English Group:10x1 Tutor Group: B6 ...read more.

The above preview is unformatted text

This student written piece of work is one of many that can be found in our GCSE Miscellaneous section.

Found what you're looking for?

  • Start learning 29% faster today
  • 150,000+ documents available
  • Just £6.99 a month

Not the one? Search for your essay title...
  • Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

See related essaysSee related essays

Related GCSE Miscellaneous essays

  1. Creative Writing D-Day

    Bullets fly over head impacting with a thump in arms, legs, chests and heads. Men crumple to the floor crying out in pain and fear.

  2. Marketing courseowrk task 3 memo

    even about its newly launched products to persuade and uplift the overall customers visit to the park furthermore bringing more money to the company as there are more visitors. The main objectives of the promotional materials that have been utilized are to help introduce new products, increases sales and profit,

  1. GCSE Maths Statistics Coursework

    IQ section of the brain before this age so they will not change after that point. However to draw I firm conclusion on this I would have to repeat the study checking first, that the IQ tests are current. To further, the investigation I would compare the results of younger

  2. My Beautician hand book - Basic skincare. How make-up should be applied to different ...

    How to Apply Lipstick to Stay on Longer Steps in brief: 1. Firstly start of by applying foundation, a bit of cover stick and lots of powder onto your lips. This will set the base for your make-up. 2.

  1. Discussing Perfume Dreams by Andrew Lam.

    The temptations of the American Dreams and the liberties of the Americans chased Lam's Vietnamese identity away. Lam no longer feels connected to Vietnam he is an American now; Lam states that he could talk about the tragic past of Vietnam to anyone while the wounds of loss and defeat

  2. They shouldnt have left him alone story beginning

    The rest of her appearance wasn't as shocking, with dark purple eyes, enigma's in the white-light, moon-shaped and unrevealing.

  1. The Haunted Resort (English Creative Writing Coursework)

    Got the creeps when looking at them. There are a lot of rooms in the resort, and all, except one, have wooden doors. According to the tour guide, the room with a steel door used to be the couple's bedroom, the only room not destroyed completely in the fire.

  2. Citizenship Task. Our aim was to raise awareness of the issues concerning Global ...

    What are the key points to put across? The key points to put across are : Every action can make a difference. Donating is not the only way forward, by helping to raise awareness or taking part in any activity that will benefit those who are suffering around the world is? making a difference?.

  • Over 160,000 pieces
    of student written work
  • Annotated by
    experienced teachers
  • Ideas and feedback to
    improve your own work