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GCSE: Modern Foreign Languages
1,691 GCSE Modern Foreign Languages essays
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Un description de ma famille
This is a 4* piece of work which demonstrates a sound knowledge of pronouns. Opinions and justifications are also included. Correct adjectival agreement and the use of apostrophes in some…
- Essay length: 248 words
- Submitted: 30/08/2003
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Marked by teacher:
Sara Benson
13/03/2013
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J'ai passe mes vacances a paris l'annee derniere en Septembre pour deux semaines.
This is a 3* piece of writing. Past, present, future and conditional tenses are generally used accurately. Opinions are usually justified. To improve, accents would need to be added along…
- Essay length: 137 words
- Submitted: 18/08/2003
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Marked by teacher:
Sara Benson
13/03/2013
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French Coursework - Family and Friends
A three star piece of work. A reasonable range of structures used and a good range of adjectives and excellent adjective agreement. Good accuracy.
To gain a higher grade,…- Essay length: 265 words
- Submitted: 15/12/2002
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Marked by teacher:
Sara Benson
13/03/2013
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Mis Vacaciones
This is a 3 star piece of work and a good attempt at using the preterite tense to describe a past event. It is a fairly brief account of a…
- Essay length: 124 words
- Submitted: 11/07/2002
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Marked by teacher:
Sara Benson
13/03/2013
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Home and local area Cette anne, ca fait quinze ans que jhabite a Bath. Bath est une grande ville au sud-ouest de lAngleterre,
5 star(s)A very detailed response to the title of “Home and local areaâ€Â, well developed and informative. The candidate has fully explored and described in detail their local area and what…
- Essay length: 709 words
- Submitted: 17/12/2011
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Reviewed by:
banterbury_tales
19/02/2012
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French school
5 star(s)The candidate has responded very well to the prompt to write about her school. She has included an enormous amount of detail about her current school, the subjects she studies,…
- Essay length: 612 words
- Submitted: 08/04/2011
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Reviewed by:
medbh4805
28/03/2012
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Les femmes dans les pays francophones
5 star(s)The candidate has responded extremely well to the prompt to write about the roel of women in French speaking countries, and has done so in excellent French. There is a…
- Essay length: 812 words
- Submitted: 16/03/2010
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Reviewed by:
medbh4805
21/03/2012
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Healthy Living German Coursework
5 star(s)The writer approaches the question with attention and follows a good plan. There is structured focus on various aspects relating to healthy living and although not too much detail is…
- Essay length: 573 words
- Submitted: 04/03/2010
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Reviewed by:
evabianka
25/06/2012
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Advertising my area
5 star(s)Response to Question The brief for this essay is generally quite broad, allowing candidates to talk about a range of different things, but I really like the candidate's discussion of the…
- Essay length: 556 words
- Submitted: 08/06/2009
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Reviewed by:
ecaudate
24/03/2012
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German Coursework - Mein Urlaub
5 star(s)This essay excels at its own level in terms of language, as well as content. The question is addressed fully, with a great amount of descriptive detail, which is very…
- Essay length: 531 words
- Submitted: 01/04/2009
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Reviewed by:
evabianka
23/04/2012
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